i love the title of ur poem ...i love the poem ...really a nice poem

very beautiful poem

I grow with these people, as I do with you. DON'T NEGLECT ME!I can always use your help. Please.

Listen....... Do you hear it? Never count your days. just learn to enjoy them. thanks for you vote on my poem old friends. read some more and tell me what you think. my e-mail is posted. thanks again.

I can only be happy that I decided to come back here tonight. I live in southeast Colorado, And I've seen three tornadoes from my front porc tonight, not to mention the two trees that I saw on fire tonight. I had to wait at one and call the fdp[ because it was just a flamin! Thanks .

Great description, only thing I'm not sure about is the line breaks.

Nice, I've been playing around with a poem that has a similar theme to this. =-)

This is very well-written. I'm always drawn to these poems which seem to expand the reflection of a single moment and tell a story of feelings instead of events. I especially like this because it really made no sense to me until I read into the things that seemed out of place. I feel that the introduction of the characters is a little too strong since the conclusion doesn't really wrap up their stories.

Bravo - well done.

Easy for most nature lovers to identify with, and your use of repetitions is well-received, at least by me. Looks like a lot of effort and appreciation went into this. Have to knock you for giving your own poem a 10 though (remember, your IP is always logged whether logged in or not). Well done though.

More visual art than poetry, especially when taken in a poetic context, but powerful nonetheless.

Aye, good cleaning up. Also, I have a problem with "I sat in a cloud." With all of the Western imagery associated with clouds, it's difficult to put yourself in (or on) one and still have the reader believe that you are lonesome and/or depressed. Think of Zeuss, angels, and of course, Mick Jagger!

You don't need to sing or sign your name at the bottom, dagga, sir. Your dame has sighed or sung it already. Five, really?

"looked down on his throne" is thrown from the middle ages and a great line. "Surely they're shared" is not, try they've. Overall, an inspiring thought.