SupremeDreamer
replying on Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer
11 Aug 2004, 1:27 PM
Let me say this fuckwit, I have no urge to spit out racial slurs, but I will call you an oversensitive bitch clinging to a victim mindset, deluded that every white man who ever said nigger wants to call you a stupid negro... Hows that? Thats what I "really" think, about YOU.
As for you babbling about black history or how african slaves survived or the injustice they continued to suffer after being freed, you know about as much as I do, which is next to nothing, you most likely never had to endure anything more than a bad look from some scared pale and flaking old hag clinging to her moldy handbag that smells of old hair and musty perfume.
Also, any twit can sit there and say "we talk about how to survive" and its quite easy when they never actually had to tread with caution in order to survive, but somehow its still "fashionable" to most morons that make up the larger part of society.
Now, you can continue regurgitating your anti-kkk defense and black history month lecture, or you can shut up, in either case you'll end up boring the fuck out of me.
toodles wh0re.
SDreamer.
Let me tell you something bubba, you will never know how a person will feel about anything they read. i dont give a damn what kind of comments you make or what you call a person.so wipe the milk from around your mouth,and grow the fuck up and be a man.and what i mean by that is instead of calling me a embrowned
asshat or i will be shitpie'd oneday or another. just call me a nigger and get it over with. i'd rather for a man to say what he really feels than to play teenage
games with me,see in my life time i've been called nigger,colored,afro-american,coon,boy. and now i'm black. like i told you before i like the damn lyric. but you just took shit the wrong way.you aint nothing but a niggling i know you dont know what it mean. so i'm going to tell you. it means trifling,piddling,inconsequential,measly ,picayune.its
educated black people in the south with master degrees
that our forefathers fought and died for so that we could have a better future in your lyric you talk about pride. in black history we talk about how to survive. BLACK HISTORY 101 THE END
I really like your style
Prince of Void
replying on One dot.And the rest is our lives by Prince of Void
11 Aug 2004, 10:08 AM
I am talking about the expreince u might have never experienced it ........sth beyond the words and senses....
As for denying having zeroed me, you might want to take a look at the voting details and click on all three I.P.s logged and you'll find that it they all match for one rankerman in the whole damned ville... and that, my friend, is you, according to the I.P. Sneakiness results.
But say what you will, it doesn't really mean shit in the end. Saving face though, is quite pointless, since you will be shitpie'd one day or another.. its a twisted ranker tradition really.
G'day.
SDreamer. (Yes, I'm copying zodiac, doesn't it make me seem all formal?!?!?!!! w00t.)
-Hands you a proper shitwig to match your embrowned asshat-
;)
SDreamer.
Maybe it would have been better to say "INVERTEBRATE LOBSTERS".
Dear jroday,
Hi! I was just reading the comments on this poem, and couldn't help coming in your side. You're absolutely right; SupremeDreamer has never been within 2500 miles of Mississippi, has never met a non-Gay or non-hobo blackman, and has no right jumping your ass when he doesn't know what kind of shit your people been through. In addition, I thought I'd point out to him that the terms "politically correct" and "P.C." are older than his scraggly teenage ass and he's talking entirely out of his asshole. And finally, his blabber about "the pride in the song, not white pride mind you" is totally unjustified, considering who, what, and where he is. Even I, a white Southerner, wouldn't dare write a poem about, say, a drunk black blues picker from down Delta way (who, say, everyone thinks is trash except me) without first sealing up my asscrack to an unsanitary degree with extrastrength duck tape. It makes me sad to think about how, 150 years after Emancipation, we haven't come far enough to sit on a porch together drinking good watermelon wine from a shared gourd, but I guess thats the way it is. Now SupremeDreamer will probably give me shit about writing this comment too, so go ahead. Sorry about the slavery,
zodiac
What are you talking about?
You're wrong about nearly everything. My username doesn't mean anything cool; it means something Gay. I'm married to a woman who is nothing like any of the people in any poem I've ever written except the one who drinks Chivas from the bottle. We live in Crackville, Jordan, Islamland, where I'm the farthest thing from underemployed, as just this morning I had to help my landlord birth a goat before catching the 8:30 bus (tassled fringe included) to a slightly larger hole than my usual one. That is absolutely true. It is the most common thing in the world to simply propose without any real basis that everyone who would bother posting poetry on a free website is a hopeless gay introvert except for onesself. I've never offered any excuse or justification on this matter except your Gay and I'm not. And I have a Master's in Poetry from an Accredited Poetry School. As of today I have read and voted on 3077 posts on this site, so I guess I'm adequately qualified to say what kind of repetitive self-obsessed muck is perpetrated every day here, while you're not. If you're going to continue hurling such childish insults as "Your five" and "your a hopeless Gay introvert" around this site, why don't you first try hitting the Random link at the top of this page and reading till your retinas detach, instead of parading your ignorance around here like a colossal Macy's balloon in the shape of meat? P.S., I don't really mean that you're any of these things; it's simply fun to call some ubersensitive illiterate teenager a colossal dim and watch him act sensitive and self-righteous in a slightly amusing way for a while and then leave. And even that's not very much fun anymore. So hey, thanks for having this great chat with me! I'll see ya around!
zodiac
SELF-RESPECT-WHERE TALENT IS A DWARF,
SELF-ESTEEM IS A GIANT
HANG IN THERE MR BLOBBY!
I'm a blackman that bullshit comment you wrote dont mean a damn thing for what i ask you. I did'nt mean a
thing for asking what is the concept of your lyric? and
you want to stereotype me. you need to stop taking some
of your work so personally. I like the damn lyric. born,raised. great great grandfather hung in mississippi during those times. and people dont like to talk about it.you say a blackman is singing it.his
ass wont be from mississippi.but anyway S.D.you just jump all over me like i wanted to hang you like some nigger on a mississippi tree.get your shit together you help me alot when i join poemranker on my writing. those three zero's you got did'nt come from me.i live in florida. they might have come from mississippi.i bless you with a 9
Glad you enjoyed it.
Clever.
And what about voting three zeros on my lyric anonymously WITHOUT EVEN FUCKING UNDERSTANDING ITS INTENDED MESSAGE????
You see the words nigger, Mississippi, hang, and tree and you automatically flip on that idiotic PC switch (Politically Correct, in case you are not aware of current catch phrases..dimwit) and then quickly act without thinking, hiding behind the guise that somehow you are fighting back the tide of racism in society...
Did it ever occur to you that it was to be assumed, and was by most, that the lyric is sung by a black man? Do you not fucking notice any of the pride in the song, not white pride mind you, but a completely different sort of pride voiced within those lines? No, you didn't, you took no time to use the brain you were fucking born with to notice the somewhat obvious.
Congratulations, you've succeeded in proving to us rankerfolk that your are a complete and total DULLARD-NIMROD.
G'day.
Took me awhile to see the picture. Lol
Good poem...I loved the ending. -10-
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Prince of Void
replying on One dot.And the rest is our lives by Prince of Void
10 Aug 2004, 11:57 PM
i consider the concept as the heart of this poem
the concept is more important to me here