wilco
on happy birthday by rnsbreeze
2 Sep 2004, 7:59 PM
a little too...I don't know...Hallmarky for me..
I need a strong word here to show his ridiculous disrespect. Itâs amazing how much some women will put up with from a man and still give him another chance. Maybe something like bowlâs.
Like the feel and honesty - structure could be better.
-8.5-
klosterfobik
on Swimming in Space & Fishing for the Luridness Monster by SupremeDreamer
2 Sep 2004, 6:36 PM
Quite lame.
hogwash? really? For some reason, I tink that word takes away from it...but thats just me. The rest is good though.
She's young and donât know nothing âbout life. A good He-done-her-wrong-song. But is crying bold? It seems more an escape from bold. The last verse - a nice switch.
very powerful, angry and straight to the point....
hope this is a prose poem as I'm green my friends so don't laugh at me if I'm completely wrong.
xxx
Works for me at this perfect moment.-10-
Not really....... just something I wanted to share with others.
Is this poetry?
Not really. :)
A bit of both actually.
Dale? I feel retarded now, so explain. ;/
I think that when people comment on someone else's poems that they should explain what they are saying if it is comment that u dont normally hear or frase hardly used.
FOR EXAMPLE-Coments such as
"meh."
&
"Are you really 22 years old? Lord jesu's benevolent ball sack"
&
"A tic turd on high wip"
&
"A little too much piss or not enough vinegar, naybe some vodka would help"
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
1 Sep 2004, 4:41 PM
Why'd you click on it?
that's just gross
Bastards...
Ouch...
That's a religious-sounding moralist answer, like a pulpit-pounding preacher might rant. Try again. On second thought, let's leave it here lest it become a name-calling exercize with no good end.