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on Grandpa's boat by Caducus
19 Sep 2004, 5:08 AM
Good.. Struck a chord in me..
How dare you boast about having a higher maturity ranking than me? You know nothing of maturity. You're a self-righteous wally with a massive chip on your shoulder. I, on the other hand, am a leading candidate for the poemeranker maturity award:
http://www.poemranker.com/suggestion-bro
I really liked this poem, especially the lines, "We made jokes and we stole glances. Wished we were each others heart enchantment."
Try one more.
shit
hey dark angel
ur sarcasm intrigues me, but most of all it makes me laugh. people like u in australia are what are known as "classics", let me elaborate on that for u. i noe for a fact that u dnt care what people rite about u. in fact u appreciate when people jugde u because u find joy in giving them more of a reason to hate u by ur replies. this isnt about the aids issue because im soooooo over it that im under it. (literally). its about moral ethics. i can assure myself that i am at least half ur age and yet my level of maturity seems to be soo much higher. if u have nothing better to do then to sit here and make poems which make absolutely no sense then go for it, who is anyone to stop u. im glad i got the message to u and id like to thank you for reading my 1st message without 'prejudice'. im just waiting for the day u click with reality cuz u obviously noe ur facts about aids, which i must say, even though u use in a sarcastic tone tends to impress me about ur knowledge.so have a greeat day and 'TEARGAS_HEADLIGHTS' tahnks for ur reply.
Oh beat oh shit!
That's what's funny.
Jerry-was-me - you know what's funny?
Time will tell!
Far past this sad little site!
You leave the reader anxious to find out the outcome...lots of mystery in your poems...this one I liked too....
Were you raped by a black guy????????
Actually, it is really good..this sounds like it could actually become a song....very powerful this poem is....
Jarome - why do you speak of African/American people like their shit?
Way to misspeak for poets!!!!
Thank you "redneck-woman3322"
Doug
i think it was great could be a great song
ouch thats harsh,but u can feel the hate and thats great..........but i hope its not true it would be a waste of talent
This was written in memory of all the poems, stories, songs and journals lost in the mysterious erasing of the one folder than held them all. *drinks my poison* Here's to you.
Your Mum and Dad would be proud...