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Friends (Pimple) by Sirens_Voice
I'm your friend and you are mine. What happened next was a shock to our lives. We made jokes and we stole glances. Wished we were each others heart enchantment. We became close but we didn't know what it would do and how our little friendship grew. A simple hug would make my heart race and a simple smile would send me in a daze. Every small gesture every little phrase you said made me love you more every day. We thought we could make it that we could wait and see what the future held for you and me. But we are young and foolish in our ways for our hearts are not that strong and waiting isn't the way. Friendship became love which became tears for the distance between us was just too much pain. Now we are back to what we were. Just friends and nothing more. For being friends is better than being nothing at all.

Up the ladder: Dare
Down the ladder: Bad Mood

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.888889
Weighted score: 6.4444447
Overall Rank: 751
Posted: September 18, 2004 4:34 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2004 4:34 PM PDT
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[10] Skytiger @ 202.124.102.145 | 19-Sep-04/3:37 AM | Reply
I really liked this poem, especially the lines, "We made jokes and we stole glances. Wished we were each others heart enchantment."

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