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Dan garcia-Black replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 18 Oct 2004, 10:27 AM
Retard is good. Even retards understand that one. Listen up, hywel, in case you don't understand this site. Most people on this site who insult others with zeros and monologues on how dim their poems are use many pseudonyms. For all I know, you are zodiac using a friend’s computer and a different handle. So, as for never meeting you, how would I know? You would know me because I am Dan garcia-Black. If hywel is your real name then you are right. I've never met you. However, you responded to a comment that named specific people on this site. It leads my retarded brain to think you are hiding behind that hywel persona. If I'm wrong, it's because this site makes one mistrust words. Since words are the building material of our poems, the people I named in my comment are doing a disservice to the entire point of this type of site.
some deleted user replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 18 Oct 2004, 9:54 AM
I am always let down when someone who I will never meet insults me. I just wish they would show their face. But they know nothing of the mean streets of hollywood. I am a humble shoe shiner making it in the states, not in some towel haired nation. Those educated and intelligent people, they are the real dims. Retard.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Fast Dreams by cuddlytiger17 18 Oct 2004, 6:56 AM
"Here is found a paradox in that during the latter third of the nineteenth century, in a period characterized by the vilification of the tramp, there is a concomitant process occurring that also eulogized them." from "The American Hobo" by Colin Beesley
Dan garcia-Black replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 5:22 PM
Thanks for proving my point, coward.
some deleted user replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 2:52 PM
No gentleman would fight a tramp so just put away your fists and go back to your favella. It is late and no one wants their shoes shining in the dark.
BleedingRose replying on ... by Jezabele-In-Hell 17 Oct 2004, 2:39 PM
I also "feel" that nothing you ever say has any relevance or meaning.
Dovina replying on Fast Dreams by cuddlytiger17 17 Oct 2004, 2:21 PM
Yeah, okay, you were running in your dream. If only I'd known.
oneglove replying on the battle for troy by oneglove 17 Oct 2004, 2:06 PM
are you sure i wasnt the focus of the trojan war?
cuddlytiger17 replying on I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper 17 Oct 2004, 1:57 PM
All right, I don't know what your problem is, but it doesn't take a genious to click on the link that says "View voting details."
cuddlytiger17 replying on Fast Dreams by cuddlytiger17 17 Oct 2004, 1:48 PM
As in a nightmare? If you're telling me you've never had a dream in which you were running, well then I'd say I have a hard time believing you.
Dan garcia-Black replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 12:48 PM
They will say that Shardik, Zodiac and Robbins were well- schooled assholes hiding behind the electron stream known as the internet. Of course, it's easy to be brave when you hide behind pseudonyms and long distances. Give me the readings in Hollywood and Redondo, Venice, Santa Monica where Trannies, Dykes, Blacks, Whites (And the occasional straight poet) will get booed off stage because they suck. There is honesty. Honesty is transitory. By the next poet everyone will have forgotten the last poet's words. Reading in real time not hiding behind clever bullshit retorts. Any man out there care to meet me and have it out with an open reading or with fists and knives (no guns, it makes for short discussion)? Of course not! Coward's on the internet use a Roget’s to fight for them. I'm glad that Zodiac is hiding in the Middle East. Maybe he'll eventually marry a towel head and direct his bullshit into a marriage where it belongs. Losers outsource themselves because the can't make it in the States. Those who can't, teach or go to the middle east. Thanks for the chance to say hi to everyone on your poem, Dovina.
Dovina replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 11:44 AM
Sorry to have poured hope into your day. It’s the danger of writing though, the difficulty of completely removing every trace on the day before we die, overlooking something, or getting the timing wrong. God, what will they really say!?
Dovina replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 11:43 AM
It’s a pipe dream, kinda like heaven. But who knows, maybe they’ll find the good stuff and not the crap. I’d have used a nicer word, but Horus says I’m bland. He can be so sweet sometimes.
Dovina on Zipmark'd by fevriere 17 Oct 2004, 11:42 AM
It's cute the way you split the lines and ran some of the words together, but frankly, I think it detracts.
Dan garcia-Black on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 11:10 AM
God! I hate hopeful poems. Still, this one is OK.
Coul you not make this a poem just by cutting the lines at readable places? I loved it. The "he/him/her" bit's a little confusing but I like that. I really like it all.
fevriere on Youth by thepinkbunnyofdoom 17 Oct 2004, 10:58 AM
I don't think the repetition works, the speed of light line annoys me. And drop "token" for something else. That line could be the real hook but I feel the whole thing's not quick as catchy as you want it to be. As it could be.
Dan garcia-Black on One True Instant by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 10:57 AM
OK, so the last line could be "The sure hope of his shoulders inert." Good poem anyway.
Dan garcia-Black replying on One True Instant by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 10:53 AM
U R SO Gay.