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fevriere on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 10:53 AM
I like "honorably unread", I think that's a very strong line.
horus8 on Coin Operated Binoculars by T. Jonathron Remp 17 Oct 2004, 10:01 AM
A 55 word heart decunter.
horus8 on Library Window by steven adams 17 Oct 2004, 9:31 AM
You've got to be kidding? This is an unavigatable floater.
Dovina on Fast Dreams by cuddlytiger17 17 Oct 2004, 9:11 AM
I don't see how you race through a dream.
Dovina on the battle for troy by oneglove 17 Oct 2004, 9:08 AM
I hate the term, true love. It is love or not, but what is true love? Otherwise, I find this fanciful, but alright in a mushy way.
horus8 on the battle for troy by oneglove 17 Oct 2004, 9:06 AM
Your knowledge of history needs a good punting.
Dovina replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 9:01 AM
Thank you, I think. Or is that too bland a way of saying I appreciate and almost like what you are saying?
horus8 on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 17 Oct 2004, 8:57 AM
Your writing's getting stronger, but God the way your mind works... Is ah... Bland.
some deleted user replying on I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper 17 Oct 2004, 7:22 AM
A meta-ku is a haiku about a haiku. Therefore the meta part must reflect nature too. Therefore this is not even a meta-ku. In conclusion it is impossible to write a nature poem about a poem. Even this is incorrect: please understand a haiku's about nature, nature you retards.
some deleted user replying on I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper 17 Oct 2004, 7:18 AM
If you were a more articulate commentator, rollsoftoiletpaper may have better understood that you thought this poem was worth a -0-.
zodiac replying on ... by Jezabele-In-Hell 17 Oct 2004, 5:23 AM
What an extraordinarily gay comment. And wrong. And you also fall prey to saying someone's logic falls prey to something, which makes you a first-rate practitioner of Parmesean Bummingtonism in my book. Conclusions: There is no "you", just a funny-shaped knee-hat in Harris tweed.
1. What 2. No well maybe thats your problem 3. Really, well its my privaledge to parp on your unfunny poetry. 4. I didn't give it a 0, you fucking clown. Click on 'voting details' to find out who did.
zodiac replying on Damn you, Feeling. by Rollsoftoiletpaper 17 Oct 2004, 5:17 AM
Why? Do you think people keep getting more dramatic with age until they explode?
zodiac replying on the monster by oneglove 17 Oct 2004, 5:13 AM
I think it's sad no one has pointed out that the parallels between Dr. Frankenschmiel and his creation and God and his creation ARE THE WHOLE FUCKING POINT of Mary Shelley's famous novel The Hopeless Adventures of Dr. Frankenschmiel. You all fail.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on For Beth, after anal intercourse by zodiac 17 Oct 2004, 2:49 AM
Dead? Yes. But often when the weight of the world hangs heavy on my shoulders, and Gatwick Village seems like such a desperate, lonely place, I look up to the sky, cradling my drooping buttocks in the palms of my hands, half-expecting, half-hoping, to see him soaring high above the clouds, red cape billowing insanely out behind. Is it a bird? Is it a plane? No you wanker! It's superman! I know he's in a better place, wherever he is. Goodbye Christopher McReeves. Goodbye.
Let down.
Also,this Meta-ku, as you call it, certainly does deserve the zero you've given it, but just because you couldn't wash your dirty little mouth out for 2 seconds to say "this sucked", I'll give it a 10, just out of spite.
1. I probably should take it upon myself to actually know what it is I'm writing, or attempting to write. 2. I've no male genitalia with which to "funnel". 3. I live in the U.S. of A. and one of the beautiful things about it is the privaledge to do whatever the hell I want.
lol nice. ur an ass. haha.
cuddlytiger17 replying on Damn you, Feeling. by Rollsoftoiletpaper 16 Oct 2004, 8:39 PM
lol same here. But shhh thats our secret. :p