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Fast Dreams (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17 Racing through another dream
Panic is the enemy
Must stay calm,
Must stay cool
Hide yourself, silence rules.
Another game of Cat and Mouse
Dashing through an empty house
Shattered windows, smashed alarms
Solitude the only charm.
Pick up speed
Itâs drawing near
This dream is over-
The future here.
Up the ladder:
Writing dessert
Down the ladder:
dipsipglish
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Posted: October 16, 2004 6:33 PM PDT; Last modified: October 16, 2004 6:33 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5775 Comments:
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Rollsoftoiletpaper @ 152.163.101.9
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16-Oct-04/7:52 PM
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I love a good rhyming scheme :)
I don't see how you race through a dream.
As in a nightmare? If you're telling me you've never had a dream in which you were running, well then I'd say I have a hard time believing you.
Yeah, okay, you were running in your dream. If only I'd known.
"Here is found a paradox in that during the latter third of the nineteenth century, in a period characterized by the vilification of the tramp, there is a concomitant process occurring that also eulogized them." from "The American Hobo" by Colin Beesley
How utterly relevant! She obviously dreams of tramps, eulogizes them.
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