Re: Let's Grovel For Jesus And Fight The Naughty Satan! by Sing4Jesus!	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:12 AM
I love this more than 9/11.
Re: Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:09 AM
You are right that Jesus doesn't care. Maybe you'd be a bit of selfish cunt like him if you'd been nailed up by a load of wops.
Re: a comment on More and more Shuushin by mr cunt	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:06 AM
I love honesty.
Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:05 AM
Very profound
Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:04 AM
You are right, he is a cunt for a' that.
Re: Kennedy the cunt by mr cunt	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:03 AM
Very fucking funny! My best laugh since 9/11 when I shat myself with joy.
Re: a comment on All Hail! All Hail! America The Golden! by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/9:57 AM
shut your face, you cunt.
Re: All Hail! All Hail! America The Golden! by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/9:57 AM
This brings a new meaning to that old cliché, the special relationship.
Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/9:55 AM
I seem to have evacuated my bowels with laughter after reading this. Will you pay for the drycleaning?
Re: The Tale Of Marietta And The Hornbag Priest (v.1) by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/9:54 AM
Spiffing
Re: back o' the fridge by nypoet22	INTRANSIT 65.212.45.253	1-Oct-07/5:45 PM
More, more !
Re: A Patch of Time by Skamper	INTRANSIT 65.212.45.253	1-Oct-07/5:42 PM
Needs only the slightest trimming.
Re: The daughter of heels by Caducus	INTRANSIT 65.212.45.253	1-Oct-07/5:37 PM
Caducus, I think you're looking at a piece of art. But I haven't seen this piece so i can't tell you if you've captured the moment. This may work at another site that works these kind of poems. I'm sorry I can't help.
Re: a comment on Rooster Rape by Dovina	Dovina 75.82.86.162	1-Oct-07/3:48 PM
ok, “gender” is better than “sex” I’ll give you that. Wait, no I won’t. How is the house/henhouse thing confusing? He owned the henhouse and would have owned the house too, if we had allowed it. Wow, You won’t even allow me a bit of cadence with “I forgot him for a moment / abandoned watchful glance.” Too wordy? A hard taskmaster you. A rooster on my back. I thought the last line was hilariously funny, and you simply frown – a comedian’s worst outcome.
Re: Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	29-Sep-07/9:24 AM
Rose blossom of a bullet as it opens while travelling ! Awesome. Just awesome.
Re: Rooster Rape by Dovina	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	29-Sep-07/9:22 AM
Maybe it's not so heavy as clunky. Shiney feathers, eye on intruder, pomp of sound and strut, Keep those. The house /henhouse thing is confusing. Forgot and abandoned are the same,I prefer abandoned. Read mmy gender for my man? Huh? Boldly militant as angels- I prefer over mission. The rest is just too wordy, I think. Keep the Copernicus stuff. I think it gives just the right amount of ambiguity. Not sure you need the last line. I'm a little strained for time, sorry. Next time, when the rooster attacks, use a nine-iron. ;)
Re: a comment on Another Date by Dovina	Ranger 86.145.27.138	28-Sep-07/2:19 AM
Snickers
Re: Solstice, 2007 by lectricprincess	Ranger 86.145.27.138	28-Sep-07/2:12 AM
This seemed to be more suitable for a monologue rather than a poem - it feels as though it wants the lyrical embellishments of a poem, but delivered through other means (background ambience, music maybe). It would also benefit from the images evolving; what you have is mostly a collection of often-used ideas (weather, ocean, leaves etc.) which are nice but seem a little insubstantial. If you can add some truly original passages to go with the stock phrases then in my opinion it would become infinitely more engaging. On a lighter note, I went to the summer solstice at Stonehenge a few years back and it was marvellous. I'm not sure which was better; the ceremonial theatrics, or the trampling over peoples' faces in the dark because they were too paralytic to care.
Re: a comment on Another Date by Dovina	Dovina 17.255.240.138	27-Sep-07/4:07 PM
The crutch for me - he'd have to do that too. If so, he might just do.
Re: a comment on Master by Dovina	Dovina 17.255.240.138	27-Sep-07/4:04 PM
Holy Cow, I hardly believe it myself. Might hold the record for slowest passage coast-to-coast by bicycle. Did I pass you in Kansas, looking at daisies?