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The daughter of heels (Free verse) by Caducus
a black and white baby floated in a heel print on its Fathers reflection and grey gun clouds. A black and white lover dressed to hide grief inhaled his remnants from grey pipe clouds. A black and white Father was loved via bedtime truths, and technicolor fables, his nickname was ‘Bogart’ A black and white truth marched nowhere to no-one deaths regiment, pristine from conscience I, am the daughter of heels

Up the ladder: TrIcKy, tRiCky
Down the ladder: Danger Zone

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11448
Posted: September 29, 2007 8:10 AM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2007 8:10 AM PDT
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[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 65.212.45.253 | 1-Oct-07/5:37 PM | Reply
Caducus, I think you're looking at a piece of art. But I haven't seen this piece so i can't tell you if you've captured the moment. This may work at another site that works these kind of poems. I'm sorry I can't help.
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