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Dan garcia-Black on black dog by wilco 21 Jan 2005, 8:44 AM
Of course it sounds like it's about doggie roadkill but even if it isn't...-10- Good.
SupremeDreamer replying on In the Shadows by Beyond_Dreams 21 Jan 2005, 8:20 AM
Actually... I'd get away with the verb as a headline... oi, the sunday headline review.. I should cook up another and start a series... fucking crap, I have so much time and nothing to do, I'm a housecunt who's nemesis is the Idiot-box.. deary me.. wheres my fucking straight razor...
SupremeDreamer replying on the pretenders by PopoyMola 21 Jan 2005, 8:16 AM
Er, no bizznatch, I must speak or my breath shant have stirred the universe, you wretched 'n shriveled cunt.
SupremeDreamer replying on In the Shadows by Beyond_Dreams 21 Jan 2005, 8:12 AM
Name. Verb would be a bit oddish wouldn't you say, chapp-io?
Stephen Robins replying on Enlightenment by Dovina 21 Jan 2005, 7:55 AM
Please explain whose Enlightenment so influenced the founding fathers? and please also explain who deposed of slavery first; was it the Clapham bretheren or John Brown? then elucidate me as to which nation has the "Mother of Parliaments", took it in the ass from Hitler defending freedom and then blythely looked on as the nation it had spawned developed a greed unsurpassed in human history. Our Gentlemen have achieved a great deal more to improve the state of the world than your colossally mishapen corporate sloths who only appear to be able to look as far as their next grant of options. Your final riposte is as sharp as VioletSuedes features.
Dovina replying on Enlightenment by Dovina 21 Jan 2005, 6:28 AM
The Enlightenment gave rise to the American Experiment, the French Revolution, and the now ubiquitous understanding that all people have intrinsically equal rights to purse happiness. Everywhere except England. Your “gentlemen” are feudal reminder of what our ancestors fought to destroy. And now your prime minister tries to make it all right by latching onto our president like a whining boy to a big brother. No, Sir Robins, your lance is obtund. You live in dreams of dead glory.
Stephen Robins on Enlightenment by Dovina 21 Jan 2005, 4:34 AM
Nonsense, the dawn of reason has never been less likely in the U.S.: your President is a religious fanatic and your country is inhabited by moronic zealots. CNBC and Fox news fill your minds up with tripe and as a consequence there is no country in the world as close minded and addicted to a misconceived notion of freedom. No doubt Thomas Jefferson would be happy to see how the dawn of reason had broken across an obese landscape to reveal a country full of be-mulletted half wits travelling from one dispensary of sugary confection to another whilst becrying the joy of living in a land where freedom of thought extends to which Krispy Kreme donught they will fill their fat mouths with next.
wilco on The Flower by Bhaskaryya 20 Jan 2005, 8:05 PM
More showing and less telling. You could say all this much more beautifully with fewer words and a little more specific.
wilco on Playfight by fevriere 20 Jan 2005, 7:40 PM
I guess you just finished reading some Shakespeare?
nentwined on black dog by wilco 20 Jan 2005, 7:40 PM
lamplight's glow ;) definitely a lot of interesting imagery here, though you've lost me with what's going on. someone suggests murder, and I suppose I could see that--but not enough. "black dog" makes me think (of a friend, firstly, but after that) maybe--a hit and run... or a car crash (oil slick, and chasing shadows). Well, the words give me a car crash, the dog makes me think hit and run. Can you tell I'm really, really lost? I'd like a few more crumbs of detail to piece the puzzle together.
wilco on The Snow Globe by Caducus 20 Jan 2005, 5:36 PM
beautifully written, although sad.
wilco on Enlightenment by Dovina 20 Jan 2005, 5:34 PM
in an age of...much better than your last, D.
wilco on Blue Executioner by Caducus 20 Jan 2005, 5:31 PM
well done
wilco on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom 20 Jan 2005, 5:30 PM
I think it's pretty good, but I'd use out of instead of outta.
Dovina replying on Enlightenment by Dovina 20 Jan 2005, 10:50 AM
Oh, Wow, could I have been so cruel as to imply that asses should be kicked?
Dan garcia-Black on Enlightenment by Dovina 20 Jan 2005, 8:02 AM
Way to go, Dovina. The only queen America bows to these days is George Michaels. Kick the Brits ass.
Dovina replying on Sounds by Dovina 20 Jan 2005, 6:45 AM
Fascinating indeed
Dovina replying on Sounds by Dovina 20 Jan 2005, 6:45 AM
Thanks for honesty. One sound that will not change is the sound of a fart in church. Maybe I should write about that.
Dovina on black dog by wilco 20 Jan 2005, 6:33 AM
Is it from the dog's pov? The "red on black" line makes me think it's an old dog, and the master needed to kill it as we do with old dogs.
Stephen Robins replying on Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina 20 Jan 2005, 3:32 AM
Yes I do. You silly quim.