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Playfight (Free verse) by fevriere
Your fingers interfere with mine
You toy with my cheek,
play with my lips,
mess my hair.
You wind me up.
And when we kiss,
don't think I can't feel
your hand hard on my throat
your teeth that nip my lip,
your body shaking and fretting as we kiss.
It's better if we leave each other alone for a while.
You live in your body, and I in mine, for
all a Montague need do is set one foot in the house of a Capulet
or touch eye to eye
to spark a bloody riot in young hearts.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9787
Posted: January 18, 2005 4:43 AM PST; Last modified: January 18, 2005 4:43 AM PST
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