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Playfight (Free verse) by fevriere
Your fingers interfere with mine You toy with my cheek, play with my lips, mess my hair. You wind me up. And when we kiss, don't think I can't feel your hand hard on my throat your teeth that nip my lip, your body shaking and fretting as we kiss. It's better if we leave each other alone for a while. You live in your body, and I in mine, for all a Montague need do is set one foot in the house of a Capulet or touch eye to eye to spark a bloody riot in young hearts.

Up the ladder: Pointless
Down the ladder: HE CAN SAVE YOU

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9735
Posted: January 18, 2005 4:43 AM PST; Last modified: January 18, 2005 4:43 AM PST
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[6] wilco @ 24.165.207.93 | 20-Jan-05/7:40 PM | Reply
I guess you just finished reading some Shakespeare?
[n/a] fevriere @ 62.254.128.4 > wilco | 22-Jan-05/3:11 AM | Reply
Yes; Othello.
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