poemranker ::Playfight by fevriere

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Free verse № 118584

Playfight

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 Jan 2005 · 2 comments

Your fingers interfere with mine You toy with my cheek, play with my lips, mess my hair. You wind me up. And when we kiss, don't think I can't feel your hand hard on my throat your teeth that nip my lip, your body shaking and fretting as we kiss. It's better if we leave each other alone for a while. You live in your body, and I in mine, for all a Montague need do is set one foot in the house of a Capulet or touch eye to eye to spark a bloody riot in young hearts.

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[6] wilco 20-Jan-05/7:40 PM Reply
I guess you just finished reading some Shakespeare?
[n/a] fevriere › wilco 22-Jan-05/3:11 AM Reply
Yes; Othello.