Crakyamuni
replying on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
2 Feb 2005, 9:35 AM
Doesn't make sense? Doesn't make fu*ckin sense?! Yeah, so look around. It's all sense and sensibility in life isn't it my dear? Just God's glories tits leaking out beauty and structure. You have the sensibilities of a jackrabbit from tucson, az.
You got some nerve lady. Shaken not stirred.
Clear enough.
"Man if I did what I wanted
It would leave you daunted"
I dunno..Thats the only part I like.
I really like this poem and anyone who says anything bad about it is just jealous because none of their stuff is as good.
Well good for you!
Enjoyable reading
The first two lines were a hook for rhyme-loving girls like self. What are golden heels about? I do like it, even the gentle shortening of the line lengths is very effective but I can't help thinking if you played around with it more, it might flow - moments like reflection/perception don't seem to be exceptions but more highlights.
What do you think; do you want it to rhyme?
No vote yet because I don't believe it's finished.
Must be a terrible thirst!
Simple, pleasing.
I think he's not American, hence his ability to use (and comprehend a use for) all those pesky shades of gray between 0 and 10.
fevriere
replying on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere
2 Feb 2005, 8:12 AM
They were late addition. Tempted to cut them to:
where you cannot make love flower
or get me drunk on your heady scent.
And lose the lust..love's.. lines.
But women don't find alternative ways of solving spatial awareness problems. They just parp. In all other domains, I am unaware of any significant differences between the sexes. If you're going to suggest important situations in which a lack of spatial awareness is an advantage, then that might constitute a refutation of my argument that mens are better than womens. As it is, you're parping about like the woman you are.
No. I consider the sexes unequal and different. Unlike certain British commentators on this site, I think that on average men and women are equal intellectually. On average, there are differences in how women and men think, but not in their ability to reason and to think through a given situation and form good methods of dealing with it. Since we are different, it follows that input from both sexes is more likely to produce the best solution.
Was my attack on embroidery stronger than my attack on womanhood?
You returned and did it. Thanks.
It's that sort of thinking that gives rise to snake charmers and people who sit on mountain tops because somebody says Jesus will return on a certain day.
That's illogical! Why does accepting that there is a God imply that He probably created some paradise? You are a very silly person to think that.
I am not a bit concerned about that because your attack on womanhood was so weak that I made no defense except to point out that embroidary is really quite complex.
I think that would be a really clever way to get their own back on the Americans, don't vote, say they preferred being under a dictatorship because they don't have the intelligence to think for themselves.
Do you think Iraqis should boycott the election?