Who's TISA?

i completely agree

Choices. You want fries with chilicheese or or chilicheese with fries? Where are those choices I remember Lincoln/Bryant or JFK/Nixon or God/Apple? How did you stay awake? Well written. Well, there's always 2008- Arnold/Denzel.

Permanent solution to temporary situation. May I have your shotgun when you're finished, Kurt?

I came to read this because I thought your name was 'massangil' like the douche.

Birches? I thought it was a typo- moist air stroking bitch's white lace on porcelain skin

very good i like it

very nicely done

Hmmm interesting thoughts, bet I know where you were when you thought of this one.................

It seems a few mere strings to undo in theory and a few folds to flatten in what time and space you had available would have been no problem for one so adept in grammar. Oh well.

oh dear that was like squashed emo droppings, totally gross, you fucking SUCK!

That was a skid mark, really, did the world lie to you son? Pull up your britches, and learn to lie better.

I've seen smattered bug strewn across nine hour road tripped windows with more sole, you cad.

There is so much more wrong with Americans and their perceptions of what life is all about - oh do tell more.

The Kitchen ( A Free curse) By Capt. Napkin Fat eyes pleading Plump hands reaching out Obese gravy stuffed dumplings Lifeless Pugeot smells of life drinking spirits Plummish smells of deaf defeated pots and pans Old crapes on sheets, old flour on him Nectarine hair, bloating rumps "The illusion of health and food full bellies"? A cornucopia of...Corn... Starving for pop Still clinging to aluminum, clamoring for salt "The smell of death I met miles outside"? Inside, the Kitchen gleamed with new dishes to break my momma tongue against like a wounded seal on the dingy of infidelity, and a filthy floor.

you've done better, and without comma splices. some phrases were very good, and i liked the feel of the poem, but've seen/read a LOT of Lord of the Rings in the past few days and was reminded too much of it. And a comic book called 'sandman'. Anyway, I usually like your stuff but this didn't do it for me.

i wouldn't quit my day job, but that's a nice rhythm.

i wouldn't say you are emo droppings, but that does seem more posed than honest. it is poetry, not lit class.

Multes pisces in meam corpum nudum diffundo

He probably looked in your "poetry diary" and realised what a horrible mistake he was about to make. Copyright ©2004 Michele J Post