You're a sheer and complete asshole.

Oh beat oh shit!

You're such a fuckin' fraud!!!

I loved this poem! Heartfelt and right to the point...honest, sincere and very direct are the emotions I felt in this poem....well written...

Actually, it is really good..this sounds like it could actually become a song....very powerful this poem is....

A sick brick of shallow!

Your Mum and Dad would be proud...

The more I read over this poem, the more my emotions are stirred and I'm reminded of a lost love. Your writing is heartfelt and very real - loved it.

You leave the reader anxious to find out the outcome...lots of mystery in your poems...this one I liked too....

Vivid, and pleasantly wicked. -=10=-

Very cool lyrics, luv to hear the song...ahhh, the good old days!

Don't be put off by my meagre vote. Lyrics can be hard to judge when not backed by music.

You and I have something in common - we write as we experience and feel things. I understand completely what you mean in your poem, but it kinda rambles a little. Understandably, it's hard to sum up an experience that leaves one feeling lost, but perhaps you could shorten the length of the poem by altering the layout. Does that make any sense?

This was written in memory of all the poems, stories, songs and journals lost in the mysterious erasing of the one folder than held them all. *drinks my poison* Here's to you.

ouch thats harsh,but u can feel the hate and thats great..........but i hope its not true it would be a waste of talent

fuckin great...i liked it all,rhymes rythym flow its great

so far im lovin your work...keep going... ill keep reading

i think it was great could be a great song

good poem, keep up the good work

hey dark angel ur sarcasm intrigues me, but most of all it makes me laugh. people like u in australia are what are known as "classics", let me elaborate on that for u. i noe for a fact that u dnt care what people rite about u. in fact u appreciate when people jugde u because u find joy in giving them more of a reason to hate u by ur replies. this isnt about the aids issue because im soooooo over it that im under it. (literally). its about moral ethics. i can assure myself that i am at least half ur age and yet my level of maturity seems to be soo much higher. if u have nothing better to do then to sit here and make poems which make absolutely no sense then go for it, who is anyone to stop u. im glad i got the message to u and id like to thank you for reading my 1st message without 'prejudice'. im just waiting for the day u click with reality cuz u obviously noe ur facts about aids, which i must say, even though u use in a sarcastic tone tends to impress me about ur knowledge.so have a greeat day and 'TEARGAS_HEADLIGHTS' tahnks for ur reply.