THIS IS NOT A POEM FOR SEXUAL INTENT. THIS IS A POEM FOR SEXUAL INTETEST.

Absolutely beautiful.. Good job on the rhyming, too... Keep on writing ok..

Good.. Struck a chord in me..

It's neither thought, feeling, nor force. It's a word. And a very silly word at that. If no one had said the word to you, and if you hadn't read it in a load of confusing sentences about the eternal gobbledegook, you wouldn't even dream of prancing around like an urchin, wondering, desperately wondering, whether or not the word was actually an inner gateway to the Higher Realms of Xanthar.

Hah. It made me laugh. Not a good poem really, but since it made me laugh. That's points all on it's own. -5-

While I am sure you are very qualified to judge your own poetry, being the one who excreted it from your sticky hands, you may like to let others vote on your poems, and refrain from voting on them yourself. Granted, your own self-opinion is a completely accurate indicator of how good your poetry actually is and self-absorbtion is the only way to get an honest objective picture of yourself, and also granted that the number of IPS from which you are able to vote "anonymously" runs in direct proportion to the value of your opinion, I must ask you not to do so, if only so that those who are not as great and important as the poetry God you most indubitably and immutably are can have their humble opinion included in equal weight to your own.

Wow. Your own self opinion was almost as accurate as the anatomically fitting username you've picked.

Thank you, dear eponymous LittleWeenis for the anonymous vote and the user vote that so clearly show my inadequacies that I was unable to see before. I know you are unable to do something of that nature simply out of anger and therefore I humbly bow to you and your bow'ls for all the good low votes you give me. Thank you LittleWeenis, for showing me the error of my ways, you have touched my heart to song.

shit

Try one more.

really beautiful i like :) and keep going on with ur poems

I really liked this poem, especially the lines, "We made jokes and we stole glances. Wished we were each others heart enchantment."

The poem held my attention until the last four lines. It kinda loses it's momentum. However, I think it's pretty good.

"like water" - an excellent simile. Well done!

Sasha, although your opinion means about as much to me as a pile of dog snot, one thing bothers me. The self-voting thing. Now I don't know how many times I have to check everything for evidence of this self-voting before it gets through your oh so thick skull, but I'm tired of it now. If I were to vote on my own crap, then certainly, I would vote on it from a 3rd party point of view. And since that's the case, I don't vote on my own stuff. Also, I really can't stand anonymous votes because they leave no comments. I do value opinion, well most opinions, and when the whole annonymous thing happens, well, it does nothing but put a number on the score. I want comments. If everything I write from now on gets no votes at all, I want comments. So Sasha, perhaps you'd like to shake some salt and pepper on that foot so it'll be easier to suck on.

V-=MARY=-V

still sucks!

Yawn

shit

0 at the least!