I found this poem entertaining Considering who wrote it it's amazing I've never ever seen such rhyming Here's a 10 for your great poeming

This poem is about Bush's Jesus not Tony Blair's or yours. Right?

hey. WHen is your ban from AP up? that place is starting to scare me... DP roberson has been banned too. Bulletin threads are being censored left and right.

I think you need a title.

You have tried to relate an emotion you have felt to your readers using what you think are logical bridges and similis, but they fail logically. Most readers of poetry appreciate both emotion and logic.

this poem is a dicgrace to the human race

sketchy man

that sucks

what the heck man

it doesnt flow man

thanks for the advice

Better than your last, but punctuation would help, not hinder the flow, as some think.

A humpbacked turd.

Profoundly stupid. Delegation is a time management technique, but you seem to think it's somehow equivalent to or a product of procrastination, which is the failure to apply any time management techniques.

Your comedy is dull.

pretty good if u say so myself but u could cut down on the cussing check out one of my poems-- HANGING or THERES A VIOCE DEEP INSIDE MY HEAD

You are the piss soaked remnants of a piss soaked granny at Yasser's funeral.

very emotional

Close...

The term "like just" is the downfall of American culture in general. Unless you're saying "Like just shut the fuck up". Selling bad writing, such as this, with yammering glee; as you and your sister do daily, deserves a realitty tv show of its own, or at least an acid rain enima.