brazen
on some deleted poem
14 Feb 2005, 3:22 AM
someone out there is so vain that i bet they think this poem is about them.
short, sweet, and 57 times to the point.
apparently, if i was junk food i'd be a cheeseball.
Ah, middle-eastern inspiration. I can't believe people failed to get this.
-Enkidu
-D. $ Fontera
I'm just not getting this. Maybe I'm not trying. Sorry, I just don't care tonight.
My poem is about the torture of hearing the phrase "dot.com" over and over and over again in virutally all forms of media throughout the era of the dot.com boom which emanated out of Silicon Valley a few years ago. Nowadays, "dot.com" is not so pervasive, but it sure was then. This poem was the device I came up with to free my mind from the phrase's monotonous grip.
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brazen
on Valentine's Day is Two Days Away and I Don't Feel Loved by MacFrantic
13 Feb 2005, 1:24 AM
i like the first stanze, but it is all a little too random for me...though i admit to being just as random.
i commend anyone anti-moore. i may not like Bush, but as an inspiring film maker you have to hate a jackass who puts himself into others peoples stories.
There really should be more werewolf poems.
Wow, single stanzas are ruling write now. In this, it happens to be the last. *7*
Vinsanity! *5*
Ineresting style, I like it.
Feels like a synthesis of something, if you told me it was generated via a program I would not be surprised - nor would I like it any less.
if you say so. *6*
No words come close, to what I see in you, but no words
can explain. None I can think of ever do.
Many words come to mind. As there's so much more. But no words can express. And no tongue can tell. Just what
I see in you, or how I feel as well.
Just putting a little icing on the cake, and good luck.
Give him about 4 more months, he'll at least have it running south. -9-
Needs more liquid sodomy,
and less bluff.
"fire and plum"?
Brought a smile to my face, but the
rest bored me stupid.
You've obviously OD on chilled smegma.
Touch your toes, count to ten, and relax.