DurtKL
on some deleted poem
8 Mar 2005, 1:26 PM
banda aceh...tsunamied? wet? debris? dead bodies?
lol
thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL
8 Mar 2005, 2:37 PM
Whats sad is its true, but funny none the less, welcome back.
<3 Jason
If you're calling it Poet, Earth Mover, then maybe use bulldozer in the last line. Or you could call it Poet, Farmer.
great job a beautiful poem and well written. well done.
beautifully written. a 10. well done, an excellent writer. A++++++++++++!!
brought a tear to my eye and was very inspirational. well done, you're amazing. well written. a beautiful poem. I'll give you a 6, because i still think you need a little bit of work. you're on the right track!
good.
thank you, thank you, thank you. you made me teary and it is the best poem i have ever read. EVER. i would consider becoming a serious poet if i was you. beautifulli written and inspirational. be sure to read "eat what you want" by burgerking33. thank you!!!
i reread your poem and i take back what i said. i was a little too harsh on you, and i'm sorry. It wasn't bad, but i think it needs revision. i'll give you a 6. a very good improvement since your earlier writings, may i add. -thanks
in-cred-a-bull.
man, this was AM-AZ-ING. this is what poetry
is all about,
well done. i wish i could give you an 11.
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kinda depressing, don't you think.
if it's based on a true and personal experience,
i feel for ya. It was a decent piece of writing, but it
needs revision to make it to the top.
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well written, humurous.
i'll give ya a 7.
I'm sure thepinkbunnyofdoom appreciates the 10 you gave to each of his poems today, and the zeros needed to raise several of his to the top 20, helped of course by the 10's of Vince Dolamando, Nicely done! You realize, the poetntial is unlimited with multiple usernames and annonymous votes.
I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
Are you a Saggitarius?
The one that looks like a g-nome.
Easy day. These things usually drag on for months. Who the hell is Devilbuni?
And you bother to write poetry because? Your sister dared you? You thought that somehow you'd develop a skill for it that no knew you possed? Or you were way too bored?
Whatever the reason, stop. Your not good at it, and if think this is good than I pity you, and say, read some lyrics from the music you listen to. Because if you at least read the words of people using things like similes, and metaphors, you might actually have come here with something better that looks like a poem. -0- I see no artistic value in this what so ever. Much less your praising yourself before anyone else read your words(All though whether you knew it or not at the time it was smart, because I doubt mainy other people will).
i love a good eye opening poem. good job, im not american, blessed be.
but as a human i agree.