misused
on If I Had by forsaken
3 Apr 2008, 8:32 PM
your so talented
At least my stuff isn't boring, trite pieces of crap like yours.
Ok, the Rankin guy isn't even that wonderful to begin with, why would anyone copy his crap? Isn't there some sort of person that, oh, you know, administrates this site or something, that should have the power to say, delete this user?! What's going on here?!
And besides, what sort of person would plagiarize poetry on some unknown corner of the web?!? Obviously he has autism or some other sort of mental illness. Maybe you guys should just leave him alone, or beat and rape him with sticks like they did in the good old days... I don't really care.
Its been nearly 5 years since I wrote this. If you take a moment to read my latest submission you'll find my attitude has changed dramatically. Thank god and the few who have really loved me!
"uncontrolled thoughts" so very true. I comment on my own work in reflection. Self hatred, confustion, destruction, addiction. I made that change, I dumped all addiction, clean and sober for over two years now. Still random in my mind but no longer clouded with destructive addiction. What a grim reminder of where I used to be.
Yes I did mean poodles
I really like this one
womanhood in starked nakedness !
Mom please don't heed this poem
don,t go ahead anymore.
powerful one!
My new face is...younger than before...a chaos
Of Nightingales and flow'rs.
Yeah. Works for me.
Are you calling the USA a bottom?
Vaseline (another petroleum product)will break the condom. Better to use butt-er.
Quote the maven, "Nevermore!"
Puddles of bloody poodles could be a follow-up.
This might be better in 4 lines:
circumstance and one gone away
in the next room, zebra stripped, cat
for a dream
and some Taurus, blank
or I don't know. I liked it so much I re-typed it. 9. Don't you miss the loudness of the electric typrwriter?
I'm impressed, and read this 3 times, liking it better every time. That 2nd stanza two-line opening is stunning, the yolk to the albumen of this poem. Thanks for posting, and the backstory must be epic.
I like it too.
Great works on your homepage.