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Offering (Free verse) by Sasha
What can I offer you but the scraps of my lines?
What can I do?
I offer you my outlived nights, riddled with spoil and steeped in things
desirable, for they are used to mystery and a darkening hemisphere.
Dogged day brings me mere hated friends, purpled smoke and books I have
depleted. The useless corners of repeated arcades swing over me, holding
the sky as if to hold you in.
Liking drowns at low tide.
The floodgates opened, and big evening gushed with you. A word was
enough to make your beauty ceaseless. My memory turns it, tosses it to
the wave and runs for it like a dog.
The pummeling dawn finds me in an empty part of my own city. I declaim
you before the stray stars and dogs of the morning. I am on end in
search of you.
I must reach you, be afflicted with you, confabulate you in the evening'
s scraps on the beggar's lip, gather you from the shards the cool
mirrors tease me with.
I offer to invent you.
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Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9709
Posted: November 30, 2007 4:07 AM PST; Last modified: November 30, 2007 4:07 AM PST
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