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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina 21 Apr 2005, 3:44 AM
Dovina and zodiac: -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. has discovered a wonderful online test, developed by Negro Experts at Harvard, which calculates how racist you are. I suggest you both take it, and present the results to the rest of the group. "[My] data suggest a slight automatic preference for White People relative to Black People" https://implicit.harvard.edu/implicit/uk/selectatest.html Click on "take the race IAT". Work quickly, and for the love of Christ be honest when you present the results.
Dovina on tanka (3) by shadows 20 Apr 2005, 3:45 PM
Yes, you are.
Dovina on A new leaf by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 3:53 PM
"their" in Line 6. "boundless" in Line 13 "whoever" in Line 16 I hope you do not mean that you hope this is not understandable. If you do mean that, why did you write it? The first two verses make sense to me, the last two - I don't know.
Dovina on Staying Alive by darylchew 20 Apr 2005, 3:57 PM
Some grammar problems. Suicide poems usually don't work.
edpeterson on Utensils of creation by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 4:36 PM
Laughing, hard.
edpeterson on 15 Minute poem by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 4:41 PM
This is the best poem I have ever read. -0-
sonawrote on Gaping Hole by sonawrote 20 Apr 2005, 7:17 PM
I edited the title since some of the MORONS that read here are trying to be comedians.....and doing a pathetic job at it
sonawrote on A new leaf by Damien 20 Apr 2005, 7:20 PM
keep going Damien.....chin up chin up,no one ever got to their destination looking at their feet!
[mojo] on Layne Staley's Sunglasses by Jeremi B. Handrinos 20 Apr 2005, 11:59 PM
Overly bleak. Maybe i just prefer life AFFIRMING haiku?
[mojo] on The temple of Dissaray by DeadtotheWorld 21 Apr 2005, 12:01 AM
I'm always wary of any poem with "pain" "misery" "torture" and "despair" on ONE line! Seems more than a little angst(y). And "Theirs" should be "There's".
[mojo] on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos 21 Apr 2005, 12:03 AM
Different. It bears the repetition well, but starts to founder. I'd cut verse 3. "House with no start" seems nonsencicle, or stretched at best.
[mojo] on Head and Shoulders by Jeremi B. Handrinos 21 Apr 2005, 12:08 AM
Intriguing. Menthol shampoo or one of those wire devices?
Ranger on Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone 21 Apr 2005, 1:38 AM
Ha! Yes please guvn'or!
Ranger on Reflections on the current U.K. general election campaign by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 21 Apr 2005, 1:50 AM
predictably enough this has been voted on...
darylchew on Stop by [mojo] 21 Apr 2005, 2:44 AM
not a poem, i see.
[mojo] on Flesh of Stone by Tangerines 21 Apr 2005, 3:18 AM
Excellent. The numbered verses might have seemed pretentious on a lesser work, but you pull it off. Quite excellent. 10.
Goad on A new leaf by Damien 21 Apr 2005, 6:42 AM
This poem is brilliant. Of course, you need to have read http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=123683, and seen the little interplay of comments twixt sonawrote & damien to fully appreciate it as an extended double entendre.
Damien on Gaping Hole by sonawrote 21 Apr 2005, 6:54 AM
Feels like something I would of wrote. I trulty feel the meaning, if only these other "critiques" could see that.
Dovina on Stop by [mojo] 21 Apr 2005, 2:00 PM
It can't be helped. We are sick or we wouldn't do this.
Dovina on The temple of Dissaray by DeadtotheWorld 21 Apr 2005, 2:02 PM
At first I thought all the spelling and grammar irregularities were on purpose. Now I think you know no better.