Edna Sweetlove
on A List of Names That Should SHUT UP by Tyler J. Mancini
5 Aug 2008, 8:29 AM
Drivel.
Utter piffle.
Illiterate tripe.
I am honored, thank you
No prophet, just a jerk, telling lies.
Illiterate slang always has an appeal to the junkie head.
I like many things about this. The full stop at the end was my favourite.
Someone took your brain
And what you write is a pain.
This is better than it first appears. Since at first it appears to be shite, then this is not a great compliment.
This seemed to run out of steam a bit part way through. Like a fart in a thunderstorm.
I think this is one of my finest poems and I earnestly request all readers to give it 10/10 (inches).
Only a true moran would spell "moron" as "moran". I think 0/10 for this utter garbage is in order.
What a pity this is spoiled by repeated reference to that non-existent CUNT, the "God".
YOUR NEXT POEM SHOULD BE ABOUT CAPS LOCK
change dull to dim and we'll talk.
is this the entire thing?
It's good as some kind of saying or whatever. But a poem?? give me more and we'll talk.
Unfortunately, I tried your poetry and not even sea salt helped it's extreme blandness.
Do you plan on being a horrible rapper when you grow up?
messerschmidts were German WW2 planes.
This is more about the occupation of greek islands, in this case Kefalonia.
thanks for reading.
i got no mention. :( why am i even here? i don't know
Great poem.
I still can't believe that you've been formally trained in the West Flemish iambics and spent seven summers in the Tamil jungles studying Mayan prose with Professor Gerald Parm. Your roots in classic lyricism have hereby dried, and what is left is this soft, rotted tree that you call a poem. Terrible. Without purpose. Daft. Imbecility.