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BEST MOMENTS (Other) by iowajerms
BEST MOMENTS On some of the worst days of my life, Came some of the best moments I had, When the days turn into nightmares, And you expect the high points to be sad, You see your loved one fighting for his life, Not knowing if he’s going to survive or not, The most powerful thing you can do is pray, With the comfort of God over him you sought, You are there telling how your day was going, Hoping he would just be able to open his eye, You place your hand gently inside his hand, Feeling his weakness makes you begin to cry, You remember times that you had with him, And you can’t help but to sit there and pray, You want God to show you some miracles, Knowing that angels are over him that day, You start seeing something in him after that, He will begin to start showing you his might, The squeeze he puts onto your hand hurts, And you know he’s in it for the long fight, It’s just that one little motion you received, That makes that day become a great one, It’s just that little movement that he made, The atmosphere everyone has is now fun, You begin to notice other changes in him, It’s then that you notice he’s looking at you, Noticing that he has his one eye barely open, You can’t wait to go tell everyone the news, At that point you realize that he will be all right, As each day that man puts a smile on your face, The word about this man is spreading around, The support your getting is from all over the place, You start realizing God has answered your prayers He is showing you miracles through this man, And while this man continues on improving, You start realizing that your best moments began.

Down the ladder: a clover or two

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5486
Posted: August 6, 2008 1:28 AM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2008 1:28 AM PDT
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[n/a] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.211.246.255 | 7-Aug-08/7:11 AM | Reply
What a pity this is spoiled by repeated reference to that non-existent CUNT, the "God".
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