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Waking (Sonnet) by Sasha
Hearing a sound that ought to be your sleep
I reach and set my heart on your left hand
But find the window: winter, ankle-deep
In autumn, hates the pathways of the land.
But snow is slowly stepping down the tree
Where morning tries to speak, but muses rain.
I lie back, wondering if you also see
What dreams we are begetting in my brain:
Years roll along our faces and we cling
To bedsheets and each other. In cold light
Snow melts between our bodies. Everything
You do to me stakes our claim of the night.
I turn against the ceiling with your cry
As if to look for kinship with the sky.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5474
Posted: December 11, 2008 5:20 AM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2008 5:20 AM PST
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