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Duck Huntin' for this Safe House (Lyric) by Tyler J. Mancini
Michael Kried-hell-n-back jack, Yer knowz is glowin like a big... You dumb prick, I hate to burst yer bobby boy, Here's my fucking cousin, Co signed, Viper, Stop spitting on kate or ill cut jer fucking heads off. Im duck huntin' for this safe house, Don't ever touch it. Welcome to the king, Ratz-a-germany. Merge it and blow it up. We're back in the club mother fucker. Here's your joker queen, You drama king. Im the fucking comedian dumbass. I drive cars for kate, Eight. Don't ever fire this rocket again. Welcome back to hell. I cut heads off, In the shredder, Jester. Stop playing with Alicia Keys, The best of the west. Welcome to the priori of Zion, Skewl is ovAr, Rover is fucked. I cut dicks offa chix, H. You dialed the wrong number bitch (9-11). Bottle it up and sell it. Are you a fucking fan yet?

Up the ladder: soft candy

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8105
Posted: August 2, 2008 2:31 PM PDT; Last modified: August 2, 2008 2:39 PM PDT
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[0] T. Jonathron Remp @ 76.210.104.80 | 3-Aug-08/3:51 PM | Reply
I still can't believe that you've been formally trained in the West Flemish iambics and spent seven summers in the Tamil jungles studying Mayan prose with Professor Gerald Parm. Your roots in classic lyricism have hereby dried, and what is left is this soft, rotted tree that you call a poem. Terrible. Without purpose. Daft. Imbecility.
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