| Re: To drnick by amanda_dcosta |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.44 |
15-Feb-06/6:40 AM |
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For those of you who wonder why such a poem is ever written...... check out my previous poem.
drnick... you're now famous.
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| Re: To Bob, Love Ed by Bobjim |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
15-Feb-06/6:42 AM |
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Bob, you're so fine. Really.
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| Re: Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
15-Feb-06/6:44 AM |
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| Re: To drnick by amanda_dcosta |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
15-Feb-06/6:46 AM |
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drnick, you are a privileged soul! Glorious!
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| Re: Tuna and sweetcorn by Bobjim |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
15-Feb-06/6:48 AM |
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Aha! Very good, sir, very good!
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| Re: In the Land of Bob by Bobjim |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
15-Feb-06/6:53 AM |
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| Re: Lost In Her Effervescence by ALChemy |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.44 |
15-Feb-06/6:55 AM |
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Hmm not bad. I like the phrases 'soft waters', 'cold boiling ocean', 'blissful abyss', 'die as the suds die'. Things like this make up your poem. About critiquing it, looks like other's have already done so about what came to mind. She's a lucky girl to have someone still dedicate a valentine special to her.
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| Re: Panic by Bobjim |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
15-Feb-06/6:57 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
15-Feb-06/6:58 AM |
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Because you're no longer here, let's not even see this pile of rubbish. Save the worst slots for genuine rubbish.
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| Re: Valentine 2 by zodiac |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.44 |
15-Feb-06/7:09 AM |
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Quite different from my usual preference,.... but I like it. Are these news clippings from some real event. I ain't much of a news person, must admit that.
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| Re: You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger |
Bobjim 84.9.177.58 |
15-Feb-06/7:10 AM |
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Oooh! Spiritual. But more importantly...
Spiders :)
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| Re: To drnick by amanda_dcosta |
Dovina 67.72.98.85 |
15-Feb-06/8:05 AM |
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We often get proponents of religion spouting off about some evil they want to cure, but yours is made of stronger stuff.
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| Re: Rhythm of the rain by sanity |
Adriaan 198.54.202.18 |
15-Feb-06/8:16 AM |
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Good, but somehow the last stanza breaks it.
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| Re: Recognition by nentwined |
Adriaan 198.54.202.18 |
15-Feb-06/8:22 AM |
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I like it. We need a senryu categoty.
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| Re: To drnick by amanda_dcosta |
drnick 24.176.22.254 |
15-Feb-06/10:41 AM |
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I truely am honored that you would take your time to write such a kind piece of poetry, as this is, to a heathan like myself. I hope you understand that I will not rate this piece, due to undeniable bias. I will write a poem in responce to this, perhaps not directed to you...but more in explanation of myself. However, it was "His" plan for me to get really drunk alone last night...just like every year, and so I will have to wait until I am less hung-over. Thank you, again, for this =]
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zodiac 209.193.9.50 |
15-Feb-06/10:45 AM |
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| Re: To drnick by amanda_dcosta |
ALChemy 24.74.100.11 |
15-Feb-06/2:06 PM |
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Obviously drnick still thinks the best of you also and he doesn't have God to tell him he should.
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| Re: Journeyman by Glasseyez |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 86.135.203.170 |
15-Feb-06/2:25 PM |
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Excuse me, no gypsies. - No vote -
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
patty t 70.30.214.253 |
15-Feb-06/2:39 PM |
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I had to google that one. I don't have time to watch TV (I used, but not these days). Wherever Meredith is I wish her the best.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
ALChemy 24.74.100.11 |
15-Feb-06/2:48 PM |
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