Are you Don Meredith?

Aha! Very good, sir, very good!

Haha, yes indeed.

Because you're no longer here, let's not even see this pile of rubbish. Save the worst slots for genuine rubbish.

We often get proponents of religion spouting off about some evil they want to cure, but yours is made of stronger stuff.

Good, but somehow the last stanza breaks it.

I like it. We need a senryu categoty.

For those of you who wonder why such a poem is ever written...... check out my previous poem. drnick... you're now famous.

Bob, you're so fine. Really.

Is this yours?

drnick, you are a privileged soul! Glorious!

I'm converted

Hmm not bad. I like the phrases 'soft waters', 'cold boiling ocean', 'blissful abyss', 'die as the suds die'. Things like this make up your poem. About critiquing it, looks like other's have already done so about what came to mind. She's a lucky girl to have someone still dedicate a valentine special to her.

Quite different from my usual preference,.... but I like it. Are these news clippings from some real event. I ain't much of a news person, must admit that.

Oooh! Spiritual. But more importantly... Spiders :)

I truely am honored that you would take your time to write such a kind piece of poetry, as this is, to a heathan like myself. I hope you understand that I will not rate this piece, due to undeniable bias. I will write a poem in responce to this, perhaps not directed to you...but more in explanation of myself. However, it was "His" plan for me to get really drunk alone last night...just like every year, and so I will have to wait until I am less hung-over. Thank you, again, for this =]

Are you Meredith Grey?

Obviously drnick still thinks the best of you also and he doesn't have God to tell him he should.

Excuse me, no gypsies. - No vote -

I had to google that one. I don't have time to watch TV (I used, but not these days). Wherever Meredith is I wish her the best.