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Panic (Free verse) by Bobjim
When in deadly danger, When beset by doubt, Run in little circles, Wave your arms and shout.

Up the ladder: Igor's inspiration
Down the ladder: Nudesflash

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.8
Overall Rank: 1675
Posted: July 5, 2004 8:08 AM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2004 8:08 AM PDT
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Comments:
[9] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 5-Jul-04/9:34 AM | Reply
Cute.
[n/a] Bobjim @ 81.156.192.67 > Dovina | 5-Jul-04/9:39 AM | Reply
Cute!?! Is that all you can say about my masterpiece.
I'm insulted.
I think I'll crawl into a hole and die.
[9] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 > Bobjim | 5-Jul-04/9:44 AM | Reply
If you believed it a masterpiece, you would run in little circles, wave your arms and shout, "I'm insulted."
[n/a] Bobjim @ 81.156.192.67 > Dovina | 5-Jul-04/9:47 AM | Reply
Ugh. Skewered by a cunning retort. But I'm too lazy. I might possibly rock to and fro and whimper a bit but that's about all.
[4] titan69 @ 62.31.24.65 | 5-Jul-04/2:17 PM | Reply
run and keep running it stinks!
[n/a] Bobjim @ 81.156.192.67 > titan69 | 6-Jul-04/2:58 AM | Reply
You sir, are a moron. Please refrain from commenting on my poetry ever again.
[n/a] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.225 | 6-Jul-04/2:43 AM | Reply
Fine, but where's the rest of it? I feel strangely unsatisfied.
[n/a] Bobjim @ 81.156.192.67 > Nicholas Jones | 6-Jul-04/2:59 AM | Reply
That's what I thought when I wrote it, but I couldn't be bothered to write anymore.
[5] Dan garcia-Black @ 66.159.233.180 | 6-Jul-04/11:53 AM | Reply
I'm sorry to inform you, sir, that this piece is not as original as you might believe. In the 60's, there were posters with this poem in every accounting office. Ah, at my age, there is nothing new. A-5- for channeling the past so well.
[n/a] Bobjim @ 81.156.192.67 > Dan garcia-Black | 7-Jul-04/3:23 AM | Reply
I wasn't around in the 60's, nor have I been in an accounting office. I know nothing of these posters so as far as I'm concerned, this is a brilliantly original poem.
[10] RGSsparky @ 128.243.220.21 | 8-Nov-04/4:45 PM | Reply
Bobjim, you rule, keep up the poetic geniusness ness, loch ness monster ness. Wolfey beat government!
[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 15-Feb-06/6:57 AM | Reply
Haha, yes indeed.
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