regarding some deleted poem...	tomycalex 74.61.166.212	13-Aug-11/11:20 PM
I have made some minor changes..title from "ceaseless smile" to "pulsating smile" and have made from "spreads the joy" to "generates joy"....please remind me and be mentor...I shall be ever grateful...Thank you to one and all...
Re: Regterezone: Dosh. by T. Jonathron Remp	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	16-Aug-11/3:41 PM
care to post an english translation?
Re: Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp	nentwined 66.74.95.0	14-Sep-11/10:47 AM
the rhyming! I'm blinded by the rhyming!
Re: Help! by Dovina	nentwined 66.74.95.0	14-Sep-11/11:19 AM
Classy!
Re: Help! by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.239	16-Sep-11/1:18 PM
Across the Atlantic and Indian Oceans or the Pacific, the other way round.... sound waves travel. I hear you. -10- for the message! :)
Re: Munnar -a must -see destination by Jessina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.239	16-Sep-11/1:25 PM
I know Munnar... so I can connect with its landscape. but from just the description, it doesn't take me there poetically, although you may rhyme. While reading it I was looking for something that would make me say WOW as in 'yes, this is the poetry-inspiring MUNNAR'.... apart from the generalized description that every traveler to Munnar posts. I know you added some adjectives to describe it, but sometimes the reader wants more than a description. We want to find the poet in the poem.
Re: The Owl in the Wasteland by Caducus	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:48 AM
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Re: David & Derrick by TheModestKing	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:50 AM
This was quite good but something has gone wrong with the apostrophes - they come out as an a with a circumflex on top! No such typo problems at MY website, so accept my invitation to join: http://newpoetryshared.proboards.com
Re: An Ode to Teenage Pimple Poets. by Y2kSlamPoet	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:51 AM
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Re: Disaster by alvinb	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:51 AM
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Re: Late Song by nypoet22	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:52 AM
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Re: Liar by Roisin	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:53 AM
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Re: Purple Patches by skaskowski	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:54 AM
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Re: Help! by Dovina	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:54 AM
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Re: tone-deaf or color-blind by nentwined	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:55 AM
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Re: Fuck Shelters, & fuck OutReach Court. by SupremeDreamer	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:56 AM
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Re: A dream world by alvinb	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:01 AM
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Re: Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:02 AM
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Re: Hobo. [Redux Revision v.2] by SupremeDreamer	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:02 AM
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Re: To my Love by Jessina	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:03 AM
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