Re: Regterezone: Dosh. by T. Jonathron Remp	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	16-Aug-11/3:41 PM
care to post an english translation?
Re: Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp	nentwined 66.74.95.0	14-Sep-11/10:47 AM
the rhyming! I'm blinded by the rhyming!
Re: Help! by Dovina	nentwined 66.74.95.0	14-Sep-11/11:19 AM
Classy!
Re: Help! by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.239	16-Sep-11/1:18 PM
Across the Atlantic and Indian Oceans or the Pacific, the other way round.... sound waves travel. I hear you. -10- for the message! :)
Re: Munnar -a must -see destination by Jessina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.239	16-Sep-11/1:25 PM
I know Munnar... so I can connect with its landscape. but from just the description, it doesn't take me there poetically, although you may rhyme. While reading it I was looking for something that would make me say WOW as in 'yes, this is the poetry-inspiring MUNNAR'.... apart from the generalized description that every traveler to Munnar posts. I know you added some adjectives to describe it, but sometimes the reader wants more than a description. We want to find the poet in the poem.
Re: The Owl in the Wasteland by Caducus	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:48 AM
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Re: David & Derrick by TheModestKing	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:50 AM
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Re: An Ode to Teenage Pimple Poets. by Y2kSlamPoet	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:51 AM
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Re: Disaster by alvinb	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:51 AM
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Re: Late Song by nypoet22	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:52 AM
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Re: Liar by Roisin	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:53 AM
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Re: Purple Patches by skaskowski	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:54 AM
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Re: Help! by Dovina	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:54 AM
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Re: tone-deaf or color-blind by nentwined	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:55 AM
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Re: Fuck Shelters, & fuck OutReach Court. by SupremeDreamer	wDaphnew 85.210.7.225	25-Sep-11/11:56 AM
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Re: A dream world by alvinb	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:01 AM
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Re: Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:02 AM
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Re: Hobo. [Redux Revision v.2] by SupremeDreamer	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:02 AM
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Re: To my Love by Jessina	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:03 AM
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Re: Jesus wept by amanda_dcosta	wDaphnew 85.210.14.200	26-Sep-11/11:03 AM
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