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on Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp
14 Sep 2011, 10:47 AM
the rhyming! I'm blinded by the rhyming!
Across the Atlantic and Indian Oceans
or the Pacific, the other way round....
sound waves travel.
I hear you.
-10- for the message! :)
I know Munnar... so I can connect with its landscape. but from just the description, it doesn't take me there poetically, although you may rhyme. While reading it I was looking for something that would make me say WOW as in 'yes, this is the poetry-inspiring MUNNAR'.... apart from the generalized description that every traveler to Munnar posts. I know you added some adjectives to describe it, but sometimes the reader wants more than a description. We want to find the poet in the poem.
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This was quite good but something has gone wrong with the apostrophes - they come out as an a with a circumflex on top!
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