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Purple Patches (Free verse) by skaskowski
Have I gone insane? have I lost my head? the streetlight was off-white, I saw red instead. Through the Fog of a stupor I stooped low And slurred "Oh, I'd rather you dead than asleep in my head." A blue dismal memory as you threw yourself into me. Flashes of pain, purple patches from punches. Bloodshot eyes and poison ivy. A red itchy memory as I flew through air. Flashes of light left marks in my eyes as I kicked you goodbye.

Up the ladder: Whispers among me
Down the ladder: No Hitman is a Good Hitman

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.1897035
Overall Rank: 4743
Posted: August 1, 2011 10:38 AM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2011 10:38 AM PDT
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[8] nypoet22 @ 75.74.75.115 | 12-Aug-11/7:49 AM | Reply
light and whimsical in spite of the violent images.
[10] wDaphnew @ 85.210.7.225 | 25-Sep-11/11:54 AM | Reply
I liked the kick bit at the end. Please accept my invitation to join MY new poetry site:
http://newpoetryshared.proboards.com

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