A dream world

Member since 2006 · Posted 26 Sep 2011 · 7 comments

I once remember a place.. A place that is so beautiful... So Beautiful I can't explain it.. It's beauty can't be visualized.. I can't even describe it.. But I can remember it.. It is so complicated that I can't even picture it on my mind.. But I think that this place is oh so kind.. A place of my preference.. Then I sat down and thought of it.. It doesn't even exist.. It was all on my mind.. A place that I created.. A place where I can be happy.. A place that I don't even have the chance to go to..

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[9] wDaphnew 26-Sep-11/11:01 AM Reply

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[7] Dovina › wDaphnew 2-Nov-11/5:36 PM Reply

Get Lost!

[n/a] alvinb › wDaphnew 2-Dec-11/5:31 PM Reply

Nah.. I'll stay here

[7] Dovina › alvinb 8-Dec-11/7:46 PM Reply

I was talking to daphine with the wings, not you.

[n/a] alvinb › Dovina 29-Jan-12/9:45 PM Reply

I was talking to daphne too..

[7] Dovina 2-Nov-11/5:37 PM Reply

A place that needs work. It does exist, you can find it.

[0] Skamper 9-Jun-12/5:26 AM Reply

if you can't describe it...then how can we imagine it...that's the work of poets...to use words...c'mon give it to me