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A dream world (Free verse) by alvinb I once remember a place..
A place that is so beautiful...
So Beautiful I can't explain it..
It's beauty can't be visualized..
I can't even describe it..
But I can remember it..
It is so complicated that I can't even picture it on my mind..
But I think that this place is oh so kind..
A place of my preference..
Then I sat down and thought of it..
It doesn't even exist..
It was all on my mind..
A place that I created..
A place where I can be happy..
A place that I don't even have the chance to go to..
Up the ladder:
A Soldier
Down the ladder:
Yellow Leather Innards
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Posted: September 26, 2011 6:01 AM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2011 6:01 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7058 Comments:
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wDaphnew @ 85.210.14.200
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26-Sep-11/11:01 AM
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Dovina @ 208.127.227.170
> wDaphnew
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2-Nov-11/5:36 PM
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Get Lost!
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alvinb @ 121.97.68.61
> wDaphnew
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2-Dec-11/5:31 PM
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Nah.. I'll stay here
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Dovina @ 208.127.227.170
> alvinb
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8-Dec-11/7:46 PM
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I was talking to daphine with the wings, not you.
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alvinb @ 121.97.68.61
> Dovina
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29-Jan-12/9:45 PM
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I was talking to daphne too..
A place that needs work. It does exist, you can find it.
if you can't describe it...then how can we imagine it...that's the work of poets...to use words...c'mon give it to me
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