Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Munnar -a must -see destination (Other) by Jessina
Ti’s an enchanting haven of sprawling tranquil green Sleeping majestically in the lap of nature like a queen Amidst the rolling silvery mist so sheen Clad in a sheath of winding satin smooth grass hills Interspaced with cascading jungle streams that thrills A spectacular feast for every soul with its pristine stills The panoramic view of valleys decked with velvet lawn Adds vibrant hues to weary days that are gone Opening the casement of life for a lively dawn With whispering wilds and soul searching misty breeze And the refreshing drizzles that pour through canopy trees Captivates the heart of every soul that sees Nestled in the veritable sea of meandering tea plantation Cuddled with misty dawns and silent nights that ignites our imagination A true abode of God’s marvelous creation

Up the ladder: Unspoken

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 11
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 3.4
Weighted score: 4.809275
Overall Rank: 10982
Posted: June 24, 2011 4:41 AM PDT; Last modified: June 24, 2011 4:41 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[1] SupremeDreamer @ 67.188.94.175 | 5-Jul-11/12:15 PM | Reply
*Yawn*

Landscape poetry is bland and well... a picture would be more appropriate... 'Specially since your execution of this piece is cliche for the most part.
[4] nypoet22 @ 75.74.75.115 | 12-Aug-11/8:04 AM | Reply
'tis.
[6] amanda_dcosta @ 82.178.136.239 | 16-Sep-11/1:25 PM | Reply
I know Munnar... so I can connect with its landscape. but from just the description, it doesn't take me there poetically, although you may rhyme. While reading it I was looking for something that would make me say WOW as in 'yes, this is the poetry-inspiring MUNNAR'.... apart from the generalized description that every traveler to Munnar posts. I know you added some adjectives to describe it, but sometimes the reader wants more than a description. We want to find the poet in the poem.
[0] wDaphnew @ 85.210.6.129 | 31-Dec-11/8:54 AM | Reply
Totally illiterate. You must be a moron or a retard. This is an appalling poem. It is so dreadful I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
269 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2020 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001