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Liar (Free verse) by Roisin
I see her howling hysterical head
flung back, shrieking, teeth exposed.
A pink, truthless tongue
protrudes
from That mouth.
Bitch.
Bent over her desk, tan leather limbs
Almost brushing hers, the sickening shadow.
My breath comes out in quick, hot puffs.
The misty window screams at my gloved touch.
His fingers snake over her left hand.
Glinting gold and diamond
Suffocated by sin.
Shaking, I squeeze the trigger.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.476812
Overall Rank: 2823
Posted: November 16, 2007 9:45 AM PST; Last modified: September 20, 2011 8:44 AM PDT
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I think you can lose -glinting and move suffocated by sin up. I'd also like ahint as to who is catching the hot lead.
hope that helps.