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Liar (Free verse) by Roisin

I see her howling hysterical head flung back, shrieking, teeth exposed. A pink, truthless tongue protrudes from That mouth. Bitch. Bent over her desk, tan leather limbs Almost brushing hers, the sickening shadow. My breath comes out in quick, hot puffs. The misty window screams at my gloved touch. His fingers snake over her left hand. Glinting gold and diamond Suffocated by sin. Shaking, I squeeze the trigger.

Dovina 9-Jun-12/8:48 PM
Wow, somebody came in the door who makes good comments, who makes any comments, who comes in the door, who exists.




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