Re: Mr. Pig's Theme by Mr. Pig	Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60	23-Aug-06/10:00 AM
Jesus is lukwarm about his!
Re: Broken Hearted by thepinkbunnyofdooom	Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60	23-Aug-06/10:01 AM
Jesus does not like this.
Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	Sing4Jesus! 87.80.134.60	23-Aug-06/10:01 AM
Jesus wee-wees on this!
Re: Quatrain by ALChemy	Dovina 70.38.78.229	23-Aug-06/3:15 PM
A novel way of putting forth an old truth. Thought provoking. Try a less bland title, like Beauty’s Kin, Son of Beauty, even the cliché - Beauty and the Beast.
Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	Dovina 70.38.78.229	23-Aug-06/3:18 PM
it sounds so cliche that I wonder if it's satire. Either way, there is too much redundancy. For example,"He jokes around with a delightful sense of humor" simply means "He jokes." Most of the lines are like this.
Re: The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.212.140	23-Aug-06/3:28 PM
Fucking hilarious! Give it a 0/10 for talent, 10/10 for satire. The problem is: which? For the moment 5/10 and I'll make my mind up later.
Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.212.140	23-Aug-06/3:28 PM
Fabulous! Utter shit!
Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove	Caducus 86.137.20.84	24-Aug-06/1:19 AM
bravo
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 86.137.20.84	24-Aug-06/1:20 AM
dont get the last line it seems.......weird. Soz
Re: On returning to a town where I used to live by Nicholas Jones	Caducus 86.137.20.84	24-Aug-06/1:23 AM
Strong and well crafted opening. This reminded me of Larkin's earlier works in his Juvenilia poems chronicling coventry in a repugnant light and the sense of sadness that his birthplace was decaying. Its an excellent piece with an assertive voice and deserves praise.
Re: Hot by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Aug-06/6:33 AM
or not?
Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Aug-06/6:37 AM
That's rather good.
Re: Why? by Stephen Robins	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Aug-06/7:13 AM
Fucking Cunts.
Re: The Tale Of Marietta And The Hornbag Priest (v.1) by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.242.226	24-Aug-06/8:16 AM
I'll start this off by giving it a 10 myself. I am my own harshest critic and I think this is the minimum it deserves. Everyone else, please be more generous.
Re: O say, can you see? by Dovina	Sing4Jesus! 194.154.22.51	24-Aug-06/9:22 AM
Your heart is in the right place, but not your brain.
Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	some deleted user 194.154.22.51	24-Aug-06/9:40 AM
tits
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:11 PM
Delicious. BUT change the typo in line 8. I love you.
Re: Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:11 PM
I love shoving stools 8" up a boy's ass.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:12 PM
Very good indeed. We may become friends. 10/10. But watch it.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:13 PM
Be more fucking careful! Last line: thought not though. Why bollocks it through carelessness? Cunt.