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Hot (Free verse) by Dovina
Leaves hang limp outside my door.
Mountains dissolve in murk.
Air clogs in straining throats.
Life crawls in sodden heat,
while the laughing sun
turns Fahrenheit degrees,
tighter,like a vice;
and a watched sun never sets.
As evening creeps upon us,
the vice reluctantly loosens,
giving in a bit,
first under thirsty trees,
then the shaded road,
and for a little while, we sleep.
But the smog is mostly gone,
having lost its fifties hold.
The globe is warming,
scientists say,
and if theyâre right,
the children pay.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3171
Posted: July 30, 2006 4:17 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2006 5:13 PM PDT
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