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Edna Sweetlove on Shit happens by Bobjim the II 2 Sep 2006, 4:22 PM
You said it.
Edna Sweetlove on megiddo by ThePariahDog 2 Sep 2006, 4:24 PM
obscure and boring
DamienDen on fuck you by gsosville 31 Aug 2006, 9:14 PM
LOL oh this made my day, mean maybe, but take with it a grain a salt and its one can't help but laugh. Masterpiece lol. Oh god whew
Ranger on Coyote Sunsets by DamienDen 31 Aug 2006, 10:00 PM
Couple of minor points - there are a few too many articles in here for me, if you can get rid of 'the' in a couple of places it would work better (I think). Also needs a little more punctuation in places ('The tumble weeds the Buddhas complete in their wandering'). Nitpicking aside, super description here and some nicely fresh phrases ('broken backbones', 'spilling its sack of pearls'). Mightily enjoyable :-)
Caducus on An Ode To My Dead Husband Bert by Edna Sweetlove 1 Sep 2006, 7:23 AM
Bert sounds like a man my Aunt married. Gratuitously gross well done
aamir_trichy on The darkest woods ever by Shardik 2 Sep 2006, 8:17 AM
good!!
Edna Sweetlove on My sad life by Bobjim the II 2 Sep 2006, 4:23 PM
About as amusing as a boil.
Sing4Jesus! on A Fart For All Mankind by Edna Sweetlove 3 Sep 2006, 5:06 PM
Jesus will not forgive you for this!
Sing4Jesus! on Futile Words Spoken To My Married Lovers by Edna Sweetlove 3 Sep 2006, 5:08 PM
This is disgusting. Jesus said not to sleep with married men. Especially if you are a man yourself.
Sing4Jesus! on Jesus by Sing4Jesus! 3 Sep 2006, 5:09 PM
I love this.
Sing4Jesus! on Buttocks. by Ulterius 3 Sep 2006, 5:11 PM
I love to look upon the cross Where Jesus hangs (he is the BOSS) And I can see his naked bum. (God take us all 2 Kingcom Come).
matt door on Valentine by zodiac 31 Aug 2006, 7:33 PM
Read like a fucking obituary - long and painful. Your ego harms your poetry - sorry.
matt door on Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis II by SupremeDreamer 31 Aug 2006, 7:42 PM
Did u mean plains or planes, or did you just not care - 'cause this was quite long and stale. Elementary son - sorry.Simple and "plain".
Ranger on Buttocks. by Ulterius 31 Aug 2006, 10:06 PM
Hahaha, you've somehow managed to take a subject which I didn't think was amusing any more, plus a form which I didn't think could be effective any more and give me a hearty 6am chuckle ;-) I stumbled slightly with 'Pimply', it seemed slightly disruptive to the flow (no pun intended) but that could just have been my inexpert reading of it. Next poem of this type to be entitled '-bow'ls-'.
Ranger on Pleasure. (Leisure Spoof) by Ulterius 31 Aug 2006, 10:09 PM
What is this life, if led astray We haven't time for banter gay? I look forward to reading more of yours :-)
Dovina on Water by Caducus 1 Sep 2006, 12:06 PM
Verse 2 is great. Verse 1 needs a period after line 3. Verse 3 could lose the quotes around his name, I think. Verse 4 needs the space removed before "s" and a comma after "sick" and a period after line 2 and a period after Line 4. Verse 5 needs an apostrophe in "mothers" and "Grandmothers" and a comma after Line 3 and a period after Line 4.
Dovina on Deliberate Exclusion by MacFrantic 1 Sep 2006, 12:13 PM
This "Prose Poem" is too vague and lacks punch. Apparently her shameful obsequiousness is the narrator's objection. Why not make that clearly poignant?
Dovina on Covet by creepshow 1 Sep 2006, 12:15 PM
Creepy. The title is bland.
A_Dark_Calm on Royal Blades by Dovina 3 Sep 2006, 6:11 AM
Love the way you almost rhyme ice and tights.
A_Dark_Calm on megiddo by ThePariahDog 3 Sep 2006, 11:56 AM
Megiddo should be capitalized always.