| Re: George and Samson by Edna Sweetlove |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:13 PM |
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Avian homosexuality is TOTALLY OUT OF ORDER!!!!!!!
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| Re: My Pet Gerbil by Engelbert Humpalot |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:15 PM |
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God may forgive you for this. As far as I am concerned you can fuck off.
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| Re: Grafton Street Late Joys by Engelbert Humpalot |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:16 PM |
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It is better to have sex with an evil old goat than with a raving beauty I think (not sure, I am a virgin).
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| Re: Fragrant Love by Engelbert Humpalot |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:16 PM |
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| Re: Colorbars by wilco |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:17 PM |
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Incomprehensible. God forgive you. 2/10 and be blessed
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| Re: Let this world crumble to dust without you by A_Dark_Calm |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:18 PM |
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But what about the LORD JESUS?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:19 PM |
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We all know that Blair is a TURD but this is ungrammatical and not very funny. God will punish Blair and Bush. He will smash them into tiny lumps of dogshit.
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| Re: Coventry nights by Caducus |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:20 PM |
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A very fine poem. I have been to Coventry and it is a god-forsaken lump of whining Midlands horseshit with no redeeming qualities. 10/10.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Sing4Jesus! 85.210.192.216 |
3-Sep-06/5:21 PM |
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| Re: Let this world crumble to dust without you by A_Dark_Calm |
Dovina 12.72.45.53 |
3-Sep-06/5:23 PM |
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"Be with me, my wife, and I shall have a universe of life." What more could I ask. The rest of the poem does drag on a bit though.
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| Re: Royal Blades by Dovina |
Ranger 86.131.53.233 |
4-Sep-06/12:00 AM |
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Did I catch a slight hint of smugness there? I assume the poem's about you, kudos for being able to skate; I can't.
Word of warning - this poem could easily be read to carry a much more sinister meaning, if the reader has a slightly deranged mind (like mine).
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| Re: What makes you think I want to know you? by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
Ranger 86.131.53.233 |
4-Sep-06/12:03 AM |
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I dig the idea in here, but the rhythm was torturous for me. In my view, rhymes should be used to help the rhythm, not the other way round.
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| Re: Let this world crumble to dust without you by A_Dark_Calm |
Ranger 86.131.53.233 |
4-Sep-06/12:08 AM |
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I love a) the title b) the rhymes c) lines 3, 4, 5, 6 and the final two d) most of the content. Don't turn it into a haiku, haikus suck most of the time whereas I personally love a good old-fashioned form :-) I do think Dovina has a point - probably because there is so much abstractness in here (universe, 'let it happen', everything etc.). If you could build in a few more solid images to give me something tactile, I would love this more :-)
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| Re: What makes you think I want to know you? by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
A_Dark_Calm 71.75.188.163 |
4-Sep-06/12:09 AM |
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Angst you very much for posting your personal problems.
We do love to read about that.
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| Re: A Fart For All Mankind by Edna Sweetlove |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
4-Sep-06/10:01 AM |
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I can sniff it from here.
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| Re: George and Samson by Edna Sweetlove |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
4-Sep-06/10:03 AM |
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| Re: A prayer about Jesus by Sing4Jesus! |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
4-Sep-06/10:04 AM |
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| Re: The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus! |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
4-Sep-06/10:04 AM |
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| Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus! |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
4-Sep-06/10:05 AM |
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| Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus! |
Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.38 |
4-Sep-06/10:05 AM |
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