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Coventry nights (Free verse) by Caducus
Black cab cavalcades arrive
Dark vessels in dark vessels
Dress cobblestones in
H&M shadows and alcoholic sonnets
Being âI hate paki taxi driversâ.
One they call Trish has a back scab
Chinese font emblazons her back
A goddess of ultra violet
An image in orange
Blowing off a bottle of Bud.
Mandyâs out for the shag
Surrounded by chavs aroma
And words which melt her ice exterior
âyouâve got wicked tits darlinâ
ânot so bad yourself mateâ.
Three AM kerb vultures
Peck away at dead gazelles
Kebab meat gorged by kebab meat
Devoured in a spon street alleyway
Gary gets a blow job
Next to where his mate pissed.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8114
Posted: March 16, 2006 2:54 AM PST; Last modified: September 1, 2006 7:21 AM PDT
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Some nasty connotations there in 'kebab meat gorged by kebab meat'.
Line 6 - 'black scab'?
Pretty cool, very patriotic. I share your sentiments.