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Die unsowed (Free verse) by daggatolar
Until my feeling goes grey Like wine the stale taste What if my flesh goes stale Wearied out From longed desire Denied for your reason reason I would go public I cannot look into your face My heart is too you - richful Eating everything me - full Leaving me to anyother a poor dry If I don't learn to open - up To steal small space to air a little From want of hope of other- Wise from you Your love would make me die Unsowed

Up the ladder: +Enjoy The Ride+
Down the ladder: Drained and Tainted

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8067
Posted: September 15, 2004 12:50 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2004 12:50 PM PDT
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