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Die unsowed (Free verse) by daggatolar
Until my feeling goes grey
Like wine the stale taste
What if my flesh goes stale
Wearied out
From longed desire
Denied for your reason reason
I would go public
I cannot look into your face
My heart is too you - richful
Eating everything me - full
Leaving me to anyother a poor dry
If I don't learn to open - up
To steal small space to air a little
From want of hope of other-
Wise from you
Your love would make me die
Unsowed
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8127
Posted: September 15, 2004 12:50 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2004 12:50 PM PDT
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