Quarton
on some deleted poem
27 Feb 2007, 10:56 AM
As Harry Carey would say, "holy cow." Or is that "Holy Ghost?" Not a pretty picture you paint.
Looks like you're a prize cunt...
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Total bollox. You are clearly a cunt, even cuntier than than moron cunt Rockmage.
Shite.
Cunt.
What a fucking great poem about cunts!
Great poem!
Looks like you're a prize cunt...
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Great! You are a cunt, but a clever cunt, unlike the other cunts. You cunt.
Fuck those yankee cunts! Ship the cunts home in a body bag!
Fuck those Texan cunts!
HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have never laughed so much in all my life!!! The funniest thing since 9/11!!!!!!!!!!
How about having a new poetic nom de plume (that means pen name Col): Dr Colin Anus.
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts.
Yes, I am the center of the universe and all being surrounds me. If I am happy, the clouds are happy; sad, the sea is dark. Improve the grammar, as half.Italian advised on your last one, and clean up some superfluous language and you'll have a nice poem
It's cute and almost funny, but it rambles on and pays too much attention to rhyme.
I've stopped trying to shed a little optimism in your "lines in this fatal misery." Carry on.
It's an interesting attempt as unusual language. I'd prefer to see the Old English done with proper grammar though. You mix new and old in an interesting way, but if the old is not done properly, then people think you're just blabbing without having learned the form. A nice attempt at something different.
It goes along well in the first half. Then the logic of yarn that was once a sweater being like a person thinking she's less bright than she imagines, escapes me.