SupremeDreamer
on looking for by Phalkon
23 Feb 2007, 3:51 PM
Four.
I like it. Sounds like a Dylan song.
Like this. Lots of interesting lines. Last time we kissed you had more teeth. Jellyfish are so smart.
ur poems are adventures in the world of shit
all condoms that you used in this wasteland
it's no more uselful like ur cyber-shit
that make u think that u are the most talented
so slowly open your eyes to the entwined world
that contains no more shit
It seems not banal. Whatever makes it so? Calm rain wasted on the sea perhaps, but surely not the gulls, buoy, empathy.
I must convey
My utter dismay
At finding today
Terry Wogan's toupee
In a state of decay
Upon your cheese tray.
shit poem, I hate cats.....
Fuck you, frufru-head. 10.
Finely wrought, like a tramp's damp nappy.
LOLTTM. 0.
pointlessness, writer's block, man-as-machine - dismal topics overdone.
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
on Now What Am I Supposed To Think About Love? by capachijim
23 Feb 2007, 1:53 AM
Please, in the interests of common decency, do not write any more poems until you are at least 12 years old.
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The final line should read 'that godawful nentwined'.
Iâm far away from the claws of the dark city
Iâm heading to the firestorm
And the summer wind tries to creep beside me
Iâm going slowly against the sitting sun
My eyes will be the flame of a candle
The Candle burn at both ends
Iâm pursuing the best ends
By my beginning knows my end
However Iâm crossing the horizons of Mysterious silence
Itâs more like outlook of my life
before my pen pin down what's in my head
I had stared at darkness
it holds all paths for the peace
it carry me away from the cybernetic world
to the timeless place
as i'm looking for the point on the pointless ocean
i could be placeless evermore
I liked the last two lines
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