Journey

Member since 2006 · Posted 18 Feb 2007 · 2 comments

My stripe across the sky. That carries me, my person. to and fro. An ideal home A corridor, it is mine. A metal cage. An unfair shudder. Brings me back, to life. and leaves me.

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[5] Dovina 18-Feb-07/4:12 PM Reply

You might try commenting on more than one poem before posting another. This one is particularly lacking in particulars.

[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 23-Feb-07/1:50 AM Reply

Fuck you, frufru-head. 10.