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Journey (Free verse) by madamefrufru My stripe across the sky.
That carries me, my person.
to and fro.
An ideal home
A corridor, it is mine.
A metal cage.
An unfair shudder.
Brings me back, to life.
and leaves me.
Up the ladder:
Enough
Down the ladder:
nonsense
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Posted: February 18, 2007 2:22 PM PST; Last modified: February 18, 2007 2:22 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7118 Comments:
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Dovina @ 208.127.90.113
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18-Feb-07/4:12 PM
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You might try commenting on more than one poem before posting another. This one is particularly lacking in particulars.
Fuck you, frufru-head. 10.
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