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Journey (Free verse) by madamefrufru

My stripe across the sky. That carries me, my person. to and fro. An ideal home A corridor, it is mine. A metal cage. An unfair shudder. Brings me back, to life. and leaves me.

Dovina 18-Feb-07/4:12 PM
You might try commenting on more than one poem before posting another. This one is particularly lacking in particulars.




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