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Monday Night in Milwaukee (Free verse) by jessicazee
Sack races, margaritas, drug dealer's big-screened porn. U-turns, parallel park, a walk to the bar, an unexpected head butt. The Polish Falcon is on this block. The pushing drunk children. Handling on all sides, the next bar's flushing like a seashell, I hear the sea in my pint, I think I lost my keys down there! Randy says "just think about the music" - A Donny Hathaway song today and who won the raffle, I walked home real slow, because of the ice and the cars.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11906
Posted: February 18, 2007 7:21 PM PST; Last modified: February 18, 2007 7:21 PM PST
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