Ranger
on Ben Fogle by Stephen Robins
11 Mar 2007, 2:34 PM
I do hope you've been watching Crufts. He was particularly splendidly attired today.
Yes I have to agree.
They seem like a load of turds. Maybe the famous critic Mr Turd will appear and let us know.
Learn to spell your own fuckin' name, dickhead.
What the fuck? Here's my revised version...
City park sun-browned
Sprinkler system broken down
How about a shag?
Fabulously bad.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
12 Mar 2007, 11:50 AM
Thanks Trista!
Excellent.Better than Rockmage and Shuushit.
If you want to use street language, ok, but it's a bit off-putting as it comes only late in the poem. I bet this is a good song; like to hear it.
Pretty good.
Too much explaining and generalizing, where just showing the scene and the man's feelings would work better. With a well-worn topic like this, something unique is needed. I do like the Chorus.
Great poem. All the Kennedys are cunts. Sorry were.
Global warming
I shat myself laughing.
I know the place! It stinks of stale spunk.
Yes they stunk. They have gone now but can be found on Poetryshared and Allpoetry for those who wish to go and laugh. There the name is combined to "Colin Douglas" but it's the sam old crap.
boring.old hat.make way for the new shit bu SHUUSIT!
some deleted user
on All Hail! All Hail! America The Golden! by Edna Sweetlove
12 Mar 2007, 11:53 AM
Too liberal for me.You must be a commie.
This place has become overrun with vermin while you were away. Not much to do here anymore, unless you want to discuss feces and the like. I always like your poems, and Desnos must be ok too, but how would I know? Best of luck wherever you post.