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Bethy on STAN by poetry_rancour 13 Mar 2007, 10:04 AM
talent...fun to read...:) Bethy
Dovina on some deleted poem 12 Mar 2007, 6:29 PM
I like your stretches of words - grouts, lathes - even if they are far-fetched. Shouldn't it be Daimler's?
Bethy on A Question by poetry_rancour 13 Mar 2007, 10:05 AM
hehehe lol...and it should be...:) Bethy
Bethy on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2007, 10:06 AM
radio ga ga...old song from many moons ago...still its good :) Bethy
Dovina on A Question by poetry_rancour 13 Mar 2007, 10:21 AM
Beau is a boyfriend. But what is a "boo'? Anyway, a funny thought.
Holy Tits on a limerick from kent by nentwined 13 Mar 2007, 11:04 AM
Funnier than AIDS
some deleted user on More and more Shuushin by mr cunt 13 Mar 2007, 10:27 AM
How true.
Dovina on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2007, 10:33 AM
Welcome to Poemranker. Please ignore the slobs who have splattered this place of late, and realize that before there were some who actually tried to write and to comment. Hang in for a while and see what happens. And btw, this is rather clever and unusual. I especially like "throbbing ovaries/ eggs on legs/ legs on the move."
Holy Tits on why? by nentwined 13 Mar 2007, 11:05 AM
tripe of the highst order
Holy Tits on On The Gay Beach by Edna Sweetlove 13 Mar 2007, 11:07 AM
Kinky!
richa on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2007, 12:03 PM
This is ok. Sonnets are always a difficult discipline. I like the first four lines they skip along jauntily. Loses it a bit after that. Fresh ink smelling in a book. Really? 'Yes him, a potential reader' 'delicate pages long fingers' I just don't think the middle skips along quite as well. The language is not as crisp.
richa on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2007, 12:18 PM
I guess this is a beat poem. It has the wise-ass descriptions of the world going on around the writer but lacks any interesting episodes or themes. I like 'you me and plurality' as a turn of phrase. Should probably read 'You and I and plurality' it would rhyme too.
Dovina on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2007, 12:29 PM
It has a good rhythm and a good flow with a few exceptions – “in a daycare” “many books now become a stack” I don’t understand “its a companion that I lack.” It seems it’s a life you do not lack. Do you mean Cheerios, the breakfast cereal; or cheerios, goodbyes? I suspect the former.
Bethy on Within by drnick 13 Mar 2007, 9:43 AM
poetic -- 6 :) Bethy
Bethy on Pedaling West by Dovina 13 Mar 2007, 9:50 AM
May God grant you with "Buns of Steel" my dear friend...good poem :) Bethy
Bethy on Just today by MacFrantic 13 Mar 2007, 9:56 AM
I like this...judgement comes to those who know how the story ends...:) Bethy
Bethy on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2007, 10:02 AM
Interesting...I like the link between music and making the 10th shot, all by chance and Larry is watching...lol... he just won't turn the music back on til you move on...go ahead...make the basket...the ball is in your court... good poem :) Bethy
richa on STAN by poetry_rancour 13 Mar 2007, 12:09 PM
I don't get the ending. Looks kind of forced.
richa on snacktime by jesslew 13 Mar 2007, 12:11 PM
Don't like the last line. Like the whimsy of 'bananas are edible smiles' and the idiosyncrasy of 'everyone needs potassium.
richa on a limerick from kent by nentwined 13 Mar 2007, 12:23 PM
Interesting subversion. The grammar looks a bit convoluted. Don't get l4.