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on some deleted poem
1 Oct 2003, 8:29 AM
why no title?
it's nice, & it could use some "clues", tho i couldn't say where or what
lol
hmmmm not much to say on this one. I like it.
lmao. well, now that was good darkie. 10.
are you two going to get married soon?
will there be icecream and cookies?
(will the church have ramps for your wheelchair?)
these little details are good to know about.
(oh, and where are my lost comments?)
Awesome.
I wish I could express the same love I feel for Katie as you do for CLS without ejaculating - this is simply perfect, Laudanum to a tired mind.
The imagery is outstanding. I love the closure...sweet!
I guess you should kill yourself.
Just kidding.
"The ants were launched to feed the crow
on chocolate and survival fear.
Escaped sacrifice of great reknown
means stones-a-poppin'for this clown."
Great word play!
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
I'll tell you what you shouldn't do: write a poeme about it.
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Has potential. work on the form.
Very nice. :)
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
hipster flare
on Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism
1 Oct 2003, 9:52 AM
too bad about hating penises. they can be quite fun.
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.