Tomorrow I will re-read your poem and come again.

Hey I came again!

I have blown my whack all over my shorts.

My third leg is providing a prop to my desk after reading your poetry!

wonderfull stuff- your life is interesting indeed. 9.

hmm i dunno what to make of this... Like...when i see this...i get a feeling of cuteness...lol

You are obviously on a higher plane of consciousness than I..cause I just don't get it. Ah I get it now; you have transcribed a message appearing on the Yarmeka of a young Hebrew lad. I think you made a type-o though. It should read Bernie not Beanie. Understandiible error on your part. I knew I'd get it sooner or later. No, I am not pretentious...I'm just being a fucking wise guy..don't take it personally...I'm just fucking with you....but really, I have no idea what you mean...It could be brilliant for all I know.

Something tells me this is just right. yes, yes. Somehow I get this and it works. Excellent.

"Initiation" ???? I don't know what you are talking about, Mr. Cheese...and thank you, Joe-joe...

How am I the quickest route to grace? Are you being satirical or are you really this obsessed?

I think this needs a banjo accompaniment.

hahahahahahah hahahahahahhaha hahahahahahhahaha i foudn this funnier than my line fuck poem

add another 4 lines with the same rhyme as the first 2 , end it with 2 non rhyme lines and you have thee a sonnet ! As a poem - deluxe - the last line kind of crackles not explodes apart from that a dine squirt of ink 8

fine squirt of ink even

More bodily fluids, please.

No Tom, here's a quicker way: G R A C E Now Tommy baby let me tell ya someting about picking up chicks...cause you got the wrong approach....you've got it all backwards. Feable mind-games don't work (that's how chicks pick us up).. charm does. Let Crystal know how much you enjoy her writing..how it obviously reflects the passion of a woman of deep thoughts and firey emotions. Admit to her that you've visited her web site and find her extremely attractive. Beauty and intelligence is truely are rare combination. Finally, tell her you'd like to get to know her better. Ask her if she'd like to take in a Broadway show...perhaps some wine and cheese (no pun intended) afterwards. Tom, are you getting any of this? Hope this helps. Joe-joe

I literally can not stop coming.

If I come again my nuts will shrivel up and fall off and I shan't be able to produce anymore gametes. In the name of the lord please write no more of this sperm inducing poetry or I shall not be able to have children.

i like it, somewhere there it reminds me of something, where and what idk, tho it is there >8<

Right I hope your happy with yourself I am now unfertile; well unless I can gather up the lake of gametes under my desk and put them in the fridge before all my baby paste dies. But god that is good poetry!