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Making Love (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
As I lay
naked
Your fingers
trace my outline
illuminated
by the glow
of the candle
Lightly caressing
every
crevice
every
intricate,
private
space
and place
the makes me
whole.
My body stretches to
reach your touch
savoring
every second
every skin to skin
moment
where our moist
bodies glide together
creating one
whole
out of two equal parts
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11211
Posted: August 7, 2002 11:29 AM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2002 11:29 AM PDT
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