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Making Love (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
As I lay naked Your fingers trace my outline illuminated by the glow of the candle Lightly caressing every crevice every intricate, private space and place the makes me whole. My body stretches to reach your touch savoring every second every skin to skin moment where our moist bodies glide together creating one whole out of two equal parts

Up the ladder: Alone
Down the ladder: The Comedown

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11206
Posted: August 7, 2002 11:29 AM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2002 11:29 AM PDT
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[6] William Delacroix @ 206.116.186.109 | 1-Oct-03/2:42 AM | Reply
More bodily fluids, please.
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